help me revise the resignation letter

background ：I was this year graduate and I was employed in an education consulting company. The problem is my boss didn't give me instructor but other newcomers have one. By the way, I worked as an internship here with the contract of 3 months but i don't want to waste my time.
This is a negotiation letter, and if negotiates well, I would like to be a full worker but if not, I would like to leave.


Dear___,

I want to thank you for your kindness in giving me the internship in at SINOELITE. Before coming here, I have the admiration admired not only to you but also the whole staff here. At the first sight of the office room, I was really impressed by its novel design which sends a sense of comfort. Of course, when I came here I am was really appreciative about your leadership style with maximum freedom. But it’s a pity that I did not receive much on the job training and assignment. I know, being a graduate, I have to learn many new stuff things like new working skills and social relationships. Anyway, It’s a big transformation for me and I am so glad that I am making progress step by step.
Considering the situation that every back-up has an education consultant, every time when they got together to discuss same student, I feel that I was isolated because I wasn’t involved. This kind of isolation hurts me much because I cannot could not find my value here. Since the end of my internship is approaching, I want to know your decision about regarding me and the next working plan. To be honest, I am afraid to send this letter to you because you are the one with power to raise someone or fire someone, but I wish it’s this to be an effective communication based on equality and trust.

Best regards,

Anna

Holograms and wearable tech : What comes Next?

Today, I was read a article covered a "Holograms and wearable tech"  (Today I read an artile that covered "Holograms and wearable tech")

This year the media company 3RD Planet developed a CGI tool that through virtual reality, puts users onto the
streets of various cities. Williams, Skyscanner's CEO, notes that virtual reality becomes more commonplace. And travel companies will give clients virtual of hotels, cities and experiences.
According to the report, by 2024 travel agents, tour guides and concierges could all be replaced by a virtual entity with a finely-tuned sense of your likes, which it will gather from your search history, online reviews, social media presence and various other digital interactions.
finally,(Captalize) Finally, Williams noted that Google Glass. he said "Google Glass and its various successors could likely change the future of photography" and "Technology will probably get good at suggesting moments that you most likely want to save," he adds. (Finally, Williams noted that "google glass and its various succsesors could likely change the future of photography" and "technology will probably get good at suggesting moments that you will most likely want to save" he adds.)

when i frist saw "google Glass", I Think that it's looks like a 'scouter' which in japan animation "Dragon ball". But surprisingly, It was unthinkable, but it happened as a google glasses. (When I first saw "google glass" I thought that it looked like a 'scouter" which was in japanese animation "Dragon Ball".  It was unthinkable, but surprisignly it happened as google glasses.)
I think Google glasses can be a 'next generation of smartphone'. Moreover we don't feel disharmony in our life of that wearable tech.
Wearable device has been developed by global corporations like samsung, google etc. It is no further that we can use our glasses or watches as translator. (It is no further that we can use our glasses or watches as a translator.)
Moreover, the development of travel gives me how to prepare for the future changes.
such as google glasses, IT experts expect that watch can be a next generation of smart phone as a wearable tech.  (Moreover, the development of travel gives me the how/opportunity to prepare for future changes such as google glasses.  IT experts expect that the watch can be the next generation of smart phone as a wearable tech.)
What comes Next? As every fairy tale comes real, SF movies are realized these day.  (As every fairy tale has become real, and SF (Scify) movies are realized these days.)

Good Job, make sure you capatalize the beginning of your sentences.  I understood what you said totally.

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I have been studying English for a long time. However, my English skill is still poor. Reading is a little bit easier than speaking, listening, and writing. I feel afraid when I make the sentence if I use incorrect grammar... so, someone who see this, please help me (I feel afraid when I make these sentences.  If I use incorrect grammar... so, if someone sees this please help me.) >_< thank you.

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