5/11/2014
안녕하세요이타키친구. (Hello Italki friends)
주말 잘 보냈어요? (how was your weekend)
이번주말은 조카의 생일이었습니다. (This weekend it was my nephews birthday)
남동생집은 내 가족을 생일 파티를 했어요. (The birthday party was at my brothers house)
조카의선물이 맘에 들면 좋겠어요. (My nephew got a lot of gifts)
돌잔치는 조카의를 재미 있었어요
그래도돌잔치는 안했어요. (Even though it was first birthday There was no doljanchi)
즐거운 하루 보내길 바래요. (I hope you have a good day)
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5/11/2014
안녕하세요,_이타키친구들. (Hello Italki friends)
주말 잘 보냈어요? (how was your weekend)
이번_주말은 제 조카의 생일이었습니다. (This weekend it was my nephews birthday)
남동생_집은 내 가족을에서 생일 파티를 했어요. (The birthday party was at my brothers house)
조카의가_제 선물이을 맘에 들어 하면 좋겠어요.
(My nephew got a lot of gifts = 제 조카는 선물을 많이 받았어요.)
돌잔치는 조카의를 재미 있었어요조카는 즐거운 생일 파티를 보냈어요.
그래도_돌잔치는 안_했어요. (Even though it was first birthday There was no doljanchi)
즐거운 하루 보내길 바래라요. (I hope you have a good day)
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Above 4 sentences are ok. Looks natural.
but you should correct below sentences.
조카의 돌잔치는 재미있었어요.
첫번째 생일이지만 돌잔치는 안했어요.
Then your paragraph is ok.^^
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