When I was a little boy...

It's my first try to write about something. I was thinking what I can write about and remember the time when I was a little boy and learned my native language. I had a notebook where I wrote about the most interesting things that happened in my life. After that, my mother was checking my tales if they had mistakes. I can't remember if I had any mistakes =)
I guess to do the same something is a good idea for learning English as well. Maybe I will do it... But there is nothing to say today.

Practice makes perfect! pt2

-Isn't he fed up (with what?)? He has been working in that bank for 30 years, since he left school!
-Have you seen Karen? Yes I have, she was here just a minute ago.
-How long have you had this car? I have bought it in German 10 months ago, but I have it just for two months because it takes eight months to get it here.
-He had been driving for two hours when he realised he left his trousers at home.
-A little crowd gathered at the park entrance.I went to see what was happening and I saw a girl who was dancing with some children.
-No one has lived in that house for ages. They say there are ghosts.
-What would you like to do next Sunday?
-It's Bridget's b-day, buy something for Mary too.They're sisters, they're going to be disappointed if just one of them recieves a gift.
-If it rains, they will pull off the match, but they won't refund the tickets.
-Would you sleep on a beach on a starry summer night? If I had an hotel room I would.
-If your grandpa wanted to give you a present, what would you like to receive? If they really wanted to give me a nice present I would like a puppy or a kitten.

why have mens more rights than women?

Over time, mens have had more rights than women. For example, mens always have higher salaries, better jobs or something like that. I think that this problem is in the past, and now we are trying to change it. Women are people like men, and all people need to have the same rights.
Nowadays, in most countries women and men have the same rights. But there are countries where this is not true yet. This is a problem, and I hope that with the passing of time, it will change.

Four sentences about bleach. Can you correct any.mistskes. Thanks

Using bleach is very harmful for our health. It can even be fatal. Research carried out among nurses and cleaners shows that because of everyday exposure to bleach and chemicals their lungs were infected with the same diseases  as those who are addicted to smoking. It is strongly recommended to cover your airways to prevent lung diseases.