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Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay taxes to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The issue of whether or not peoples' incomes [just say "income," not plural here] should be fully in their charge, without paying having no taxes, is of great concern of to some people. From my perspective, I am convinced that it is not only reasonable, but also beneficial to individuals and society that taxes be instituted [say something like this].

Although some may claim that what they earn should belong to themselves is a basic human right it is a basic human right to keep all that you earn [this is a better way to say it], it is worth noting that the power and duties are an integrated part which cannot be separated [I don't understand what you're saying here]. This is because the people, as a citizens, could receive enjoy [a more correct and common statement] the rights which government works to ensure, so that there is no point in objecting the levy from government it is only reasonable for taxes to be levied by the government [a better way to put it]. Just as Like job salaries to works, the counterpart of the right is presented by paying taxes, to some extent taxes are, to some extent, the compensation for labor (in this case by the government). 

Nevertheless, some still argue that the government already has some privileges, such as exploiting the land's natural resources, and, for some people, the salaries they get exclude the surplus value they create, which means that by running businesses in specific industries, government could collects collect an additional and abundant wealth. They argue that it is no need not necessary for them government to ask the people to pay more. However, national expenditures are tremendous, covering different areas, such as infrastructure construction, public health, education, environmental protection and so forth. It is manifested [manifest = adjective, manifested = past participle; past participle is the correct choice here] that only the the only stable revenue of government could can be solely guaranteed by levying taxes from every citizen. More importantly, these consistent spending’s ultimate beneficiaries could merely belong to the people themselves. [<<I don't understand what you're saying here.] 

In a nutshell, it is my belief that the government is an organization entity [a better term] that from ought to be [<<more correct] of the people, by the people, and for the people. Based on this idea, the money collected is to better serve the people. Therefore, by no means can people refuse to pay taxes. 

I am bored

I am having a holiday break, but I haven't any arangements. It makes me feel so upset! I wanted to play with my classmates originally, but they all are busy. Oh! What a pity! What can I do? I am so bored. I can only play with my computer and my phone. It is so monotonous! Who can help me?

Unusual hobbies

Today I didn't know what to write, but I found an activity about suggesting your unusual hobbies and it made me laugh. So here is the weird result (everything is fiction).

In my opinion, the idea of broadcasting a series of programs about unusual hobbies would be interesting for the audience of your channel. I suggest that these activities have to be as showy as the ones my friends and I have.

Tango dancing
The first program would be focused on tango dancing due to the fact that it is an eye-catching and fun activity which I enjoy. In addition, it is a good way to keep in shape and also to meet friends frequently.

Collecting fossils
This program will invite people who, like me, collect fossils and have a curiosity for learning about the life in the past through different remains. The main attraction will be all the knowledge hidden in the fossils.

Mushroom growing
At this time, it is my friend's favourite activity. I think mushroom growing would be a surprising one in which you could talk about all the utensils, techniques, species and things the people could find satisfying in it.

Photography
Many people like taking photographs, so a program centered on photography would be both entertaining and interesting for most of the audience. This one would show the particular way of looking at the world by someone like my friend.

These program suggestions would probably be of interest to people in our nation. If successful, they could be the beginning of a regular telecast.

Very, very well done! And interesting!