Let me write about holdiday

At the moment I would like to make my holdiday in the snow.
I like it when everything ist white and I can drive ski.
That brings me to an other idea.
One day want to go to New Zealand.
I know the landcape of New Zealand from The lord of the rings and the hobbit. It has an amazing landcape with a lot of different
seasons. At the one site winter and on the other site summer (???) :) .
But until now I have only been to Austria, the Netherlands, Belgium, Hungary, France, Scotland and last but not least, last year in Croatia.
Croatia is a beautiful country with a much more beautiful climate than in Germany (warmer) but their seaside is full of little rocks and there is no sand :(. Every step hurts.

But when I am finish with school I want to go to England to improve my English. The reason why I want to go to England and not the USA for, example, is the money. After going to school I can't pay to fly and live in the USA.
But I am sure that England is a beautiful country too.
Only the weather will be bad. (A lot of rain and cold)

I dont no were my family will go on holdiday this year. I am clamped (???)...

PS England ist ein schon Land. Du werde liebst es. Es ist sehr kalt im Winter aber es ist 'ok' alle jahre. Habst einer Zeit schon. (excuse broken German. I know it's bad)

Moonstory

It is morning on the moon. Mike, Jay and Jennifer have woke up since recently.
Today they want to explore a mountain, which is located 5 miles from their base. They hope that they find fuel for their rocket. If they find some fuel, they can return to earth. But Jennifer does not disbelieve believe this. She says that the mountain havesn`t got the right composition. Jay asked she her whether there is any moongrass on this the mountain. She told him that there isn`t any moongrass. Jay loves to smoke moongrass. Jay is tired because he has smoked some moongrass before recently. Actually Jay has been smoking more and more moongrass. But Mike and Jennifer would like when it to be fewer and fewer. He smokes less than Bob Monnley (marely?) . But he smokes as much as he can. Jay had been smoking as Mike and Jennifer awoke. Now Jay, Mike and Jennifer are walking to the mountain. They have packed so much stuff in their backpacks. If they hadn`t packed so much stuff, they wouldn`t have had so much weight to carry.

That was pretty good. Some of the things I corrected were merely things that were unusual to say, rather the being out right wrong. However, they were very unusual phrases ("more and more").

footwear

Many people from my city hate people who wear ugg! I can't undestand why! I think that the footwear looks like Russian national shoes "valenki" and it's warm and not too much expensive to buy them one!

<em>1 Be more specific about what "ugg" is.</em>

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

l am learining english,because l want to work in the world. My native languages are kurdisch and turkish and l grew up in Antalya. l enjoy meeting people, travel ,work and reading books 

<em>1 Always start sentence with a capital letter.</em>

<em>2 Always spell names with capital letters.</em>

<em>3 when you say "I enjoy meeting" you need to state who you enjoy meeting.</em>

That was ok. I was able to understand what you meant, but there were errors.