Moonstory

It is morning on the moon. Mike, Jay and Jennifer have woke up since recently.
Today they want to explore a mountain, which is located 5 miles from their base. They hope that they find fuel for their rocket. If they find some fuel, they can return to earth. But Jennifer does not disbelieve believe this. She says that the mountain havesn`t got the right composition. Jay asked she her whether there is any moongrass on this the mountain. She told him that there isn`t any moongrass. Jay loves to smoke moongrass. Jay is tired because he has smoked some moongrass before recently. Actually Jay has been smoking more and more moongrass. But Mike and Jennifer would like when it to be fewer and fewer. He smokes less than Bob Monnley (marely?) . But he smokes as much as he can. Jay had been smoking as Mike and Jennifer awoke. Now Jay, Mike and Jennifer are walking to the mountain. They have packed so much stuff in their backpacks. If they hadn`t packed so much stuff, they wouldn`t have had so much weight to carry.

That was pretty good. Some of the things I corrected were merely things that were unusual to say, rather the being out right wrong. However, they were very unusual phrases ("more and more").