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A very unusual evening

One day, after having lunch my brother and i went to play with two other friends. It became dark, but we carried on playing. Every court had the lights off, except one court. When we finished our match, we went to the court with the lights. Quickly we recognized the players, they were famous tennis players and they were training.

We tried to speak to them, but two men in the entrance didn’t want us to. We waited there until they finished playing in order to get to know to players. They took some pictures with us!

Later we went to have dinner, but we didn't care so much anymore because we had just met some famous tennis players.

one day

Today I went to university and there were classes, afterwards I met a friend of mine and we talked about life. In the evening I studied English while socializing with friends. That day I did a lot of work.

לך לעזאזל ( lech le'azazel ) this comes form the bible, where Azazel is a type of nomands land that you are sent to, it was used in the old testament in the "scape goat" story.
some relate Azazel like a demon or something ...

If you ever saw the movie "X-Men first class", one of the villians' name was Azazel ( you could here Kevib Bacon say his name in the movie ) 

Autumn is a second spring

'Autumn is a second spring where every leaf is a flower.'
This is such a beautiful frase. I really like the scenery it described. But I don't know why there is a 'where'.
If you let me say this sentence, I may say like this. 'Autumn is a second' spring that every leaf is a flower.'
I am not sure which is correct. Could you please help me ?

The word "Where" in this context trys to put you in a certain mindset, so imagine you are in this beautiful New York style autumn and you look everyWHERE and you see every leaf as a flower.
it's a type of metaphor. this is my style of explantion , but according to the free online dictionary this is a type of conjuction and this is the following is the explantion they provided :
At what or which place: "She moved to the city, where jobs are available" 

Presentation: Porblems of transport in our city

How many times do you need to go to work ( maybe you meant , how many days a week do you work )? If you live here then probably a lot because in our hometown there isn't too much variety, we only have one bus line and the frequency isn't enough, so it takes a long time to get anywhere. Installing new ways of transport is the best way to make life easier for the people who live here 

As I said before, we only have one bus line. We don't have a train or a subway/metro, so going anywhere is quite difficult and slow. Maybe we are just not enough people living here to justify constructing a metro or train station, that's true, but at least we need some more bus lines  in order to get to  the other cities. 

If having only one bus line wasn't enough, the frecuency is also really bad. The bus passes only once an hour, so if you miss it, you don't have any other option to get where you need to go, unless you have a car. And this implies that you have to accomodate your schedule according to the bus schedule, so probably you'll have to take the bus 2 hours beforehand and keep waiting there until the hour comes.

Finally, I'll talk about how long it takes to get anywhere. Our bus line passes through all the cities in the south of Madrid, and this means that you need at least one hour and a half to go to the Madrid city center, and that's if you're lucky and there isn't too much traffic.

In conclusion, going to work or to school can be a nightmare for those who live here, and that's why our hometown needs more public transport. There are many of us who need go to other places for work or study, and with the system we already have we need to start off  our day really early, withstand a lot of traffic and waste much of our time commuting.

Good morning everybody! :)

I started my day with listening to Goran Bregovic. As usual it makes me be  in a good mood/ feel good .Wish you all have the same! :)