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A very unusual evening
One day, after to have the lunch I went with my brother to play tennis with two friends. It became darkness, but we carried on with the match. Every court had the lights off, except one court. When we finished our match, we went to the court with lights. Quickly we recognized the players, they were famous tennis players and they were training.
We tried to speak with them, but two men in the entrance didn’t want. We waited there until the end of the training to know to players. They took some picture with us!
We arrived later to the dinner, but this was not important because we had known some famous tennis players.
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Could someone review it? Thank you very much
A very unusual evening
One day, after having lunch my brother and i went to play with two other friends. It became dark, but we carried on playing. Every court had the lights off, except one court. When we finished our match, we went to the court with the lights. Quickly we recognized the players, they were famous tennis players and they were training.
We tried to speak to them, but two men in the entrance didn’t want us to. We waited there until they finished playing in order to get to know to players. They took some pictures with us!
Later we went to have dinner, but we didn't care so much anymore because we had just met some famous tennis players.
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I am sorry, It is a mistake. Thank you!
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Jose, I just corrected your first entry right as you posted this!
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