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- Musik Ich versuchte die Klavier zu lernen aber es ist sehr schwer!. Ich habe fur nur ein Monat probieren. Ich kann mit miene rechtes hand spielen aber die linke Hand ist immer noch umständlich. Jetze ich kann Fur Elise und “ A whole new world” nach Aladdin spielen . Ich mag verschiedene Arten von Musik..Pop, rock, contemporary, Accoustic und ein bisschen Klassik, vor allem, da lernen Klavier. um mir Deutsch lernen zu helfen, habe ich deutsche Musik hören. Besonders gut gefällt mir die Alin Coen band. Sie hat eine schöne StimmeOctober 28, 201220
Is there any way to make this small text more "fluent" to read
Next week the official lectures begin in my university. There are a lot of difficult (procedures) to follow. The lecture plans are chaotic: We are expected to choose our lectures even before theese they are presented to us. I was really confused, as i had only slept for a few hours due to the stress this situation caused. I've slept just few hours because of the tension towards this stressing experience.
As a result I didnt manage spoiled to get into my third lecture and I had to arrange this this morning.
The good part of it, is that I'm not the only one to have failed in the subscribing. That's how I have made new contacts (friends), even though I have forgotten most of their names ( this sounds better) I' forgotten the name of most of them ... but it's all right, as we will certainly meet informally, for collective work, or home work or even parties (and that's sure!). Today I've seen, interasting people, trying to look ordinary, boring people, trying to make themselves interesting and people who just don't care.
And It's so cool here (I mean the weather..) and the news talk about influence going through the cities. It's horrible. I'm looking for a warmer jacket. ( i'm not sure what you mean here, I think the word influence is not quite right here.)
PS: Please try to correct even if it's just to make it sound better, thx :)0 votedOctober 23, 20120- My first entry: Mein Arbeit Ich arbiete for ein grosse firma als ein wissenshaftlerin. Ich mag meine arbeit. täglich forscher ich auf haare und haut fur Gillette. Ich habe Chemie studieren an Universität. Ich habe in 2009 graduierte. Nach graduierte ich war arbietlos fur 8 monate. Es war sehr schwer weil der Rezession einer arbiet zu finden. Ich arbeitete als eine Verkäuferin für NEWLOOK vor meiner aktuellen Beruf. während bei NEWLOOK, Ich suchte Wissenschaft arbieten. Schließlich, bekam ich ein Interview bie Gillette. Ich war nervös, aber es ging gut. Ich bekam die Position! ich war sehr glucklich.October 21, 201250
Story about girl's visit to a doctor. Nothing scary) Could you please check it
At half past 10 a.m. an ambulance brought a 14 year old girl to the hospital. The girl complained of pain in the right lower part of her stomach. The Doctor asked the girl to lie down on the couch and began his examination by palpating the patient's abdomen. He made the diagnosis of acute appendicitis.
Acute appendicitis is very dangerous for the patient.<em> (maybe say fatal)</em> and its onset is often sudden. In some cases of acute appendicitis the dangerous and perforating form complicated by peritonitis may be observed.
For this reason the surgeon directed the girl to the in-patient department to be operated on at once. It was necessary to remove the appendex immediately in order to prevent its rupture which might cause the pertionitis with a fatal outcome. The girl had been operated on for the acute appendicitis on the same day. The next day she was wheeled on the stretcher cart to a dressing-room. Having helped to lay the patient down on a dressing-table the surgeon began to dress her wound. Then the surgeon examined the wound and carefully look out the ganze drain soaked with the pus. After washing the edges of operating wound the surgeon put a new outer bandage on the wound. The girl's postoperative condition was good and the wound was healing well. She was out of danger and very soon was up and about.
Thank you so much in advance!0 votedOctober 20, 20120
