Story about girl's visit to a doctor. Nothing scary) Could you please check it

At half past 10 a.m. an ambulance brought a 14 year old girl to the hospital. The girl complained of pain in the right lower part of her stomach. The Doctor asked the girl to lie down on the couch and began his examination by palpating the patient's abdomen. He made the diagnosis of acute appendicitis.
Acute appendicitis is very dangerous for the patient. (maybe say fatal) and its onset is often sudden. In some cases of acute appendicitis the dangerous and perforating form complicated by peritonitis may be observed.
For this reason the surgeon directed the girl to the in-patient department to be operated on at once. It was necessary to remove the appendex immediately in order to prevent its rupture which might cause the pertionitis with a fatal outcome. The girl had been operated on for the acute appendicitis on the same day. The next day she was wheeled on the stretcher cart to a dressing-room. Having helped to lay the patient down on a dressing-table the surgeon began to dress her wound. Then the surgeon examined the wound and carefully look out the ganze drain soaked with the pus. After washing the edges of operating wound the surgeon put a new outer bandage on the wound. The girl's postoperative condition was good and the wound was healing well. She was out of danger and very soon was up and about.

Thank you so much in advance!

Story about girl's visit to a doctor. Nothing scary) Could you please check it

At half past 10 a.m. an ambulance brought to the hospital a girl of 14. The girl complained of pain in the right lower part of her stomach. Doctor asked the girl to lie down on the couch and began his examination by palpating the patient's abdomen. He made the diagnosis of acute appendicitis.
Acute appendicitis is very dangerous to the life and its ouset is often sudden. In some cases of acute appendicitis the dangerous and perforating form complicated by peritonitis may be obseved.
For this reason surgeon directed the girl to in-patient department for being operated on at once. It was necessary to remove the appendex immediatly in order to prevent its rupture which might cause the pertionitis with fatal outcome. At the same day the girl had been operated on for the acute appendicitis. The next day she was wheeled on the stretcher cart to a dressing-room. Having helped to lay the patient down on a dressing-table the surgeon began to dress her wound. Then the surgeon examined the wound and carefully look out the ganze drain soaked with the pus. After washing the edges of operating wound the surgeon put a new outer bandage on the wound. Girl's postoperative condition was googd and wound was healing well. She was out of danger and very soon was up and about.

Thank you so much in advance!