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    any problem in this paragraph? This is used for formal writing(Statement of purpose), could anyone help me fix it ? I have always been in the top 10 since my first year of primary school, and this record remains to my college graduation. I attended the Chinese Geography Olympiad (Fujian Province) in 2008, when I was in my second year of high school. I was awarded The Excellent Student Leader in 2011 by our department and my university. This award has very strict requirements. Only less than twenty students out of 1200 students are awarded. Though very successful in most time, there was one frustration. I graduated from high school in 2009 and took Chinese College Entrance Examination the same year. However the exam result of one course turned out to be unreasonably bad, for which I still do not know the reason.
    March 11, 2013
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    any problem in this paragraph? This is used for formal writing(Statement of purpose), could anyone help me fix it ? I have always been in the top 10 since my first year of primary school, and this record remains to my college graduation. I attended the Chinese Geography Olympiad (Fujian Province) in 2008, when I was in my second year of high school. I was awarded The Excellent Student Leader in 2011 by our department and my university. This award has very strict requirements. Only less than twenty students out of 1200 students are awarded. Though very successful in most time, there was one frustration. I graduated from high school in 2009 and took Chinese College Entrance Examination the same year. However the exam result of one course turned out to be unreasonably bad, for which I still do not know the reason.
    March 11, 2013
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    请问,在英语中,“在我高二的时候”怎么说。 Second year of high school? Does anyone knows how to say " When I was in the second year of my high school"
    March 11, 2013
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    This Is My Friend‘s PS.

    I was born in a highly educated family. My parents both graduated from college in 1967, at which time college students were quite rare in China. This background offers me better education from my parents when I was a child, thus leads to my outstanding academic performance from primary school to university. I have always been in the top 10 since my first year of primary school, and this record remains to my college graduation. I attended the Chinese Physics Olympiad (Gruandong Province) in 1993, when I was in the last year of high-school, and achieved second prize. I was awarded Outstanding Graduates in 1998 by both the Ministry of Electronics Industry (PRC) and my college. My elder sister also benefits from the family background, and she is a post graduate from Zhongshan School of Medicine, Sun Yat-sen University, graduated in 2005.

    Though very successful in most time, there was one frustration. I graduated from high-school in 1994 and took Chinese College Entrance Examination the same year. According to the policy at that time we should apply to college for admission before taking the examination, and the decision will then be made based on the exam result. Based on my past performance, I applied to Peking University, one of the most famous university in China, for studying at their Electronics Engineering program. However the exam result of one course turned out to be unreasonably bad, for which I still do not know the reason, and I missed Peking University with only 7 points. My second application was made to Hangzhou Institute of Electronics Engineering (which is now Hangzhou Dianzi University) also for their Electronics Engineering program. As the Peking University required all their applicants to take an extra oral English test, and I got a good score at the test, teacher from HIEE offered me for Industrial Trade, which is basically an international trading major. I finally accepted this offer, otherwise I would not have the opportunity to go to college that year (we were only allowed to make two applications).

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    March 11, 2013
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    March 10, 2013
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    Personal statement 2 I was born in a highly educated family. My parents both graduated from college in 1967, at which time college students were quite rare in China. This background offers me better education from my parents when I was a child, thus leads to my outstanding academic performance from primary school to university. I have always been in the top 10 since my first year of primary school, and this record remains to my college graduation. I attended the Chinese Physics Olympiad (Gruandong Province) in 1993, when I was in the last year of high-school, and achieved second prize. I was awarded Outstanding Graduates in 1998 by both the Ministry of Electronics Industry (PRC) and my college. My elder sister also benefits from the family background, and she is a post graduate from Zhongshan School of Medicine, Sun Yat-sen University, graduated in 2005. Though very successful in most time, there was one frustration. I graduated from high-school in 1994 and took Chinese College Entrance Examination the same year. According to the policy at that time we should apply to college for admission before taking the examination, and the decision will then be made based on the exam result. Based on my past performance, I applied to Peking University, one of the most famous university in China, for studying at their Electronics Engineering program. However the exam result of one course turned out to be unreasonably bad, for which I still do not know the reason, and I missed Peking University with only 7 points. My second application was made to Hangzhou Institute of Electronics Engineering (which is now Hangzhou Dianzi University) also for their Electronics Engineering program. As the Peking University required all their applicants to take an extra oral English test, and I got a good score at the test, teacher from HIEE offered me for Industrial Trade, which is basically an international trading major. I finally accepted this offer, otherwise I would not have the opportunity to go to college that year (we were only allowed to make two applications).
    March 10, 2013
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    January 6, 2013
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    给中文学习者的一点小建议 Italki 对于世界各地的语言学习者而言是写作能力提升的绝佳平台。在这个社区呆了也有几个月了,看到许多中文学习者的小作文经常只是1-2句话,或者简单日常性文章。其实真正要提高写作水平需要设立一个主题,然后用母语想出进行翻译,然后利用baidu的搜索工具去搜索句子,然后与自己的句子进行对比,最后把最终的版本放到网上让母语者修改。这样对于你们的帮助时最大的,我们修改起来也比较有针对性。见缝插针似的学习虽然轻巧,但是对于语言能力的习得而言显得略具投机性。
    January 5, 2013
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    January 5, 2013
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    下个周末要见面如意的父母

    我今天终于争取我女友,如意,她答应我这个周末告诉父母我们谈恋爱,下个周末给我介绍他们~我很期待!

    今天,我终于说服我女友“如意”告诉他父母我们恋爱的事情。下个周末,她就会把她父母介绍给我认识。

    她已经认识我父母,谈一个月恋爱的时候她认识我母亲了,一起去洛杉矶的时候认识我父亲。我母亲很喜欢如意,我父亲就是有点失望因为她没有我们的喜欢徒步旅行还有她很容易累死了,哈哈哈。除了那,好象我父母对她有很好的印象。

    我之前就已经认识我父母了。我们交往差不多一个月的时候我母亲就认识她了,在我们一起去洛杉矶的时候又认识了我父亲。我母亲很喜欢如意,我父亲比较不满意的一点是她不太喜欢徒步旅行。还有一点是,可能体力的原因她很容易累。除了这些,我父母对他印象都很好。

    如意很紧张,她真的以为父母会弄死她哈哈。不过她父母都已经以前说“你为什么没有男友?我母亲48岁的时候我已经结婚了,我现在48岁你还没有过男友!”所以我觉得他们不要杀如意~

    如意很紧张,她真的以为她父母亲会弄死她。不过她父母以前曾经说过:“你为什么还没有男朋友?我妈48岁的时候我都已经结婚了,我现在都48了你还没有男朋友!” 当然我认为他们是绝对不会杀如意的。

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    January 5, 2013
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