【Part1/2】plz check grammar and point out inappropriate words! Application for study abroad program

Now, more than ever, our world is interconnected. Enterprises Businesses that do business only operate in the within a domestic market can still be affected by globalization, regardless of the location of their manufacturing operations, if there is an influx of foreign products into the domestic market [I tried to shorten this sentence a little. It makes it easier to read:) ]. To be successful in this age of globalization, in my opinion, you one must become a "Global Citizen," someone who is skilled at interacting in and between multiple cultures and capable of analyzing issues on a global level [Great sentence!]. Furthermore, the ability of prompt execution and judgment is are also required abilities to survive this business world during times of great change. My goal in university life is to acquireacquiring these skills as much as possible to become closer to being a “Global Citizen.” To achieve this, I do believe study abroad is a necessity.
　Study abroad is a challenging adventure, academically and personally, and it would be quite helpful to develop new perspectives on academic subjects and real-world issues. Moreover, COB has the finest affiliated universities all over the world. Therefore, I determineddecided to apply for this study abroad program. I have a few criteria to decide which university to visit, including: the university has a great system to support exchange students, a Japanese language course and a is located in a non-Anglosphere country.
　I would like to experience cultural diversity as much as possible by not only spending time with local people but also with other exchange students from all over the world during my study abroad. so that Through this experience, I can broaden my world understanding and perspective on just about anything and. I can also gain a deeper understanding and respect for my home country, by knowing how Japanese culture and traditions are different from others. Therefore, a good environment for exchange students in both of the university and the local town in which it is located is needed. Since it becomes much easier to make friends and be more knowledgeable about Japanese culture, it would be great if the university has Japanese language course.

[Great job! Sounds like an exciting opportunity! ^_^ ... This correction is probably coming too late, haha]