First phrases: Norwegian

- Hei!
- God morgen!
- Hva heter du?
- Jeg heter Peter. Og du?* Hva med deg?
- Jeg heter Kirill. Jeg kommer fra Russland. Hvor er du fra?
- Jeg er fra Norge. Hvordan dår går det?
- Alt dår går bra. Og Hva med deg?
- Det dår  går også bra.

Jeg dår går i til butikken. Butikken er ikke langt unna. Butikken er åpen i dag.

Mine foreldrene foreldre er hjemme. Min søster er i på skolen. Hun er veldig opptatt.

Jeg er fornøyd med min jobben min Men, men jeg er veldig trøtt.

Jeg er 26 år gammel.

Er du allerede ferdig? Hvorfor er du ikke ferdig?

Hvor er de? - De er i parken. - Er du med dem? - Nei, jeg er hjemme, jeg og sover.

* ''Og du?'' is quite informal and is used mainly when you are having conversations (oral).

I am studying tourism

Hi. I am 21 years old and I am trying to learn English. I am a student of tourism in PUNO- PERU, (and) for that reason it is very important for me to speak English .. I known know a little bit of French and portugues Portuguese, (and) I would like to speak English very well and do make some friends :)

 

*The bold words means lack of articles, and remember to write "I" capitalized :) 

Essay

In the world, it's not so important whether you are rich or not, the most important (thing) is whether they have goodness a good/kind heart to the people around you.

 

I agree :)

School
Ok! Let me say that I was not feeling good yesterday so I stayed at home. Then I when went to school today and the school only had about 20 to 30 people there. I was wondering where everyone was and I asked a teacher, and she said most of the students got food poisoning from the food we had the other day. I was dang shocked. Wow so I wasn't the only one who got sick from the nasty school food. I was sad that my friends were not there, but I made the best out of the school day. and I did alot a lot of work and got some of the teacher's lunch, which is always better then than the students' lunch. So I was happy. But I was sad again after because student council was cleared.=(

 

*Okay I know you probably know this, but you should write "i" capitalized.

**You write too much in one sentence, please try to divide it. If you're imaging reading most of the long sentences, you won't be able to breathe while reading it. Please try to add commas and dots when needed.

I know you're American so my deepest apologize if you feel uncomfortable. However, entries are made to be corrected so I did that anyway. Cheers! :) 

(En) Ny norsk sang jeg hørte

Hei,

Har du hørt det sangen som heter "Pinne for landet"? Jeg begynte å høre på norsk musikk. Dette bør forbedre min norsk norsken min*. Hva tror du?

One main thing: what is "tror"? I got this (Hva tror du) from Google translate but the word "tror" alone doesn't translate into anything meaningful.

Tusen takk.

*"Dette bør forbedre min norsk" isn't quite incorrect, but saying "Dette bør forbedre norsken min" is more appropiate and sounds more natural. these cases is possesive pronouncs, but I won't explain it since it's more for advanced level.

**Tror means two things in Norwegian, which is understandable why you could be confused. Tror means either "believe" or "think". Not ("think" = "tenke") but as in ("Jeg tror"="I think")

Don't mix up "tror" with "tro" which could mean "believe" and "faith". 

uke+ på læring norsk Å lære norsk mer enn en uke . *I wasn't sure what your title meant, so I just assumed you meant the correction I made*

Hallo!

Så jeg har vært læring lært norsk på mer enn en uke nå. Det går ganske bra. Jeg bruker Memrise og Anki. Jeg har også har kjøpt noen bøker. Jeg prøver å lese artikler på klartale.no, og det er fortsatt vanskelig.

Takk og har ha en fin natt!

 

*Bold words means that you have forgotten to add the additional words that supports the sentence such as "I, and" etc. 

*You must practice the grammatical tenses, such as present tense.

 

*the reason we say "har også" instead of "også har" is because there are some differences between them when we use it on sentences, and in your case it would be incorrect to use "har" <em>after</em> "også". But don't get too hung up on that since you're still new learning Norwegian.

I'm very impressed and you seem to learn fast! Lykke til :)

I get your point but there are some slight differences. Nouns + pronouns = personal pronouns (Personlige pronomen), whereas pronouns + nouns (the reverse one as you said) = possesive pronouns (eiendomspronomen) as you're talking about. Nouns + pronouns isn't possesive pronouns just part of it, that's the difference but some would still consider both the as part of possesive pronouns. Okay aside from that the difference is there aren't much differences because we usually just say this depending on how the sentence fits the most naturally. For example what you said: "bilen din" and "din bil" you won't really see the difference because both are acceptable, but we have something called "subjekt i ubestemt form" )subject in irregular form) and "subjekt i bestemt form" (subject in regular form". As you can see "din bil" is subjekt i ubestemt form, whereas "bilen din" is subjekt i bestemt form. There is more about this but it's too long to explain, I have just covered the most important differences you can notice. But learning this is for more advanced level, I wouldn't recommend you to be too bothered by the difference if you're still new learning Norwegian. By the way, we don't say "mi kone", "mi" which is equal as "min" is incorrect and "mi" is inproper grammar. We use that only when we speak informal or it depends on which dialect it comes from. I know I'm not very good to explain but I hope you can tell the differences now.