ハロ、私はブレトです＾＾

私はブレト（Brett)です。　私は日本語が上手（じょうず）じゃありません。でも　がんばっています。　かんじは　むずかしくて、あまり　しりません。　ごめんえ。　

日本がすきだ。先週（せんしゅう）に　日本に　いきました。でも、日本語を　話しませんでした。だから、今日本語をべんきょうします。三月（さんがつ）に　にほんに　いきたい＾＾。

Hello, I am Brett. I am not very good at Japanese yet. But i am trying my best. I don't know very much kanji, because it is very hard.

I love Japan. Last year i went to japan. But i could not speak Japanese yet. That is why I am studying Japanese now. I want to go back to japan in march.

confession

Actually，I am not a confident girl，I feel very lonely because my lover left me six years ago. I cannot let her go(her她or him他...是他还是她..你是les么).it is really hard for me to smile again/be happy again. You cannot imagine how upset I am.

I always cry in the middle night because it drives me crazy(个人意见，仅供参考).I know the only way to choose(do) is to wash away the memory,but how?

The blue corrections are my own opinions..

and the red ones are something should be used in formal essay

蓝色部分是我个人意见，仅供参考。。。

红色部分你没有用错，只不过在正规书写中应该这么写，I永远大写。。非正式体书写无所谓

Sorry for your loss...hope you can cheer up again..

希望你能够恢复以往的笑容。。。离开你的人终究很难再回来，还是尽早忘掉的好，开始新的生活，生活不应该停滞不前

学会自信，会发生奇迹的。。。

记得微博上有一条，女孩应该善待自己，好运会降临的❤ :)