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Hi! I live and study in Zagreb. I'm interested in art, theater, literature, traveling, and different cultures. I'd like to improve my French, and I would be happy to help you with your Croatian or English.
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  • Corrected

    Some of the previous corrections are in serbian, so this is a completely croatian version  :)

    Hope it will be helpful!

     

    Moj prvi član ( you mean article? then it's (moj prvi)članak; notes - (moje prve) bilješke; essay - (moj prvi)sastavak)

    Zdravo!
    Zovem se Eliška, jesam iz Češke i studiram na sveučilištu (or na faksu). Imam 20 (dvadeset) godina. Govorim engleski, talijanski i sada također želim učiti hrvatski jezik zato što sam ljeti  zaposlena u putničkoj agenciji. U Hrvatskoj puno ljudi govori engleski ili vrlo dobro češki. Nema problema dogovoriti se (Better Nije problem sporazumjeti se). Ali ja volim učiti jezike i želim u Hrvatskoj govoriti hrvatski.
    Nemam učitelja hrvatskog jezika ali imam udžbenik, slušam radio i ponekad gledam hrvatske filmove. Moj najdraži film se zove Nije kraj. Ovaj film je vrlo tragičan, ali također duhovit.
    Ja sam odlučila da ću pisati ovaj dnevnik (journal) zato što nema nikoga da nemam nikoga s kim mogu govoriti hrvatski. Jedino u školi imam prijateljicu iz Srbije. Srpski jezik je sličan, ali nije to isto. Hvala za sve ispravke mojeg teksta!

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    January 18, 2013
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    Ispit u školi

    Sutra ću imati ispit iz anatomije. Danas nisam mnogo učila stoga se ne osjećam vrlo dobro(or better "ne osjećam baš sigurno" or "ne osjećam baš sigurnom u svoje znanje" - like you're not sure about how much you know). Nadam se da to neće biti teško. Iz testa trebam imati najmanje 55 % (pedeset pet posto) dobro, to izgleda lako(or to se čini lako). Ali moji drugi iz razreda jesu učili puno više. Ovo je moj zadnji ispit, nakon njega sam slobodna. Radujem se unaprijed praznicima.(or iz it just one day off? Then it's prazniku) (= I look forward to the holiday?)
    Danas sam malo tužna. Gledala sam fotografije iz Hrvatske. Nedostaje mi Hrvatska. Također me smeta što je moj papagaj bolestan. Već sam za njega kupila vitamine.
    Hvala za vaše vrijeme(Hvala Vam na Vašem vremenu)!

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    January 18, 2013
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  • Corrected

     

    "Bok! Želio bih malo vježbati hrvatski jer unatoč činjenici da sam ga učio pet godina, više uopće ne koristim taj jezik pa sad govorim kao malo dijete*!"

     

    "jer unatoč" would be better to replace with:

    "...vježbati hrvatski. Unatoč činjenici..."

    "...vježbati hrvatski. Iako sam ga učio..."


    *child - dijete; children - djeca

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    October 26, 2012
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  • Answered
    I think the 1st sentence is missing the verb, singing should be in Present Simple, and soul is missing "the". How glorious is a bitterness of the soul that can still sing joy to those who missed the solace. 2nd I think should be: Keep cheerfulness of serving (to) all people. or Stay cheerful in serving (to) all people.
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    October 23, 2012
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    If you shift, you might be on time for 2:19. But it's better to know the context to say what it's exactly about... So it could be about for example - making 2:19 train - catching the train at 2:19 or - make the 2:19 as a score in some game Those are things that come to my mind...
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    October 21, 2012
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  • Answered
    It's spelled "mistakes" not "misteakes". But beside that, I think both versions are fine. I would maybe just write in second part "mistakes". If we're talking in general, I guess it refers to more than one mistake, but it's not so important.
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    October 20, 2012
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  • Answered
    It's correct. Only we write "vas" with capital letter as a sign of respect ("...molim Vas..."). If you want to use "još", you can say: "Molim Vas još samo trenutak, nismo odlučili" (That you could say if someone has already asked you before and now again, but you're asking for some more time.) or "Molim Vas samo trenutak, još nismo odlučili" or "... nismo još odlučili" or "...nismo odlučili još" :) Actually in this case you can put it at any of those places and none of them sounds weird. As you see "još" is more than welcome at any place in this sentence ;) Croatian is pretty flexible with placing words sometimes.
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    September 19, 2012
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