During my holiday (Please make corections)

During my holiday, I didn't really go to so very many places, because I had to move to a new place.
So during the first week of the summer vacation, I did lots of packing and cleaning, and the second week I spent unpacking and cleaning.
During that time, I was excited and at the same time exhausted.
I was excited because we were moving to a new place and I was exhausted because of the cleaning and carrying lots of boxes in and out the house.
My summer vacation started weird but it was not so bad!!
Well... the rest of my summer vacation was relaxing and fun so... I guess it turned out to be okay.
I was especially very excited (most excited??) when my grandparents came to visit in early August.
They stayed here for two weeks. We took them to nearby tourist spots.
They really enjoyed the castle.
The zoo next it was very nice too. It was very different from the zoos I had seen before; the animals there looked very healthy and relaxed.
I really liked that particularly zoo.
( I useally hate Zoos cuz animals gets locked up in a tinny cages)
I had lots of fun there.
I also visited my friend's (this is correct if you are talking about one friend from a previous school) house, whom I knew from my previous school.
We went shopping together in the city, and we also did artistic facial make-up, I had lots of fun with my friend as well.
Time passed by so fast and the summer vacation was over in a matter of a second.
I wished that it would have lasted longer.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

i am learning english everyday,because i want to go to different country and make

I am learning English every day, because I want to go to a different country and make

different friends.my native language is chinese,i think some people do not like

different friends.  My native language is Chinese.  I think some people do not like the Chinese people, but the Chinese people are really nice.  They are the most friendly people in the world.

chinese.but chinese is really good. they are the most friendly people in the world , my father often tell me if you were grow up, you would be a person who make

My father oftens tells me, "If you were grown up, you would be a person who makes people laugh and feel happy.  Do not consider only yourself."

people laugh and feel happy.do not consider only yourself .
that is a common chinese people 's thinking.

That is common Chinese people's thinking.
do you like chinese people?

Do you like Chinese people?

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello everyone!

Let me explain about how I came to be here. Well, I used to read English books and articles on the internet to learn more vocabulary, and I realized that my vocabulary is very poor. I have some issues with adverbs, prepositions and verbs adding "up" or "out" words.

I´d love to learn more about it (what are you referring to?), and the grammar structure. I know that I have to read frequently to learn more vocabulary, and but when I read the words, as that I said before, I get lost in the context. So, please help me to understand what I read.

Have a great day! Regards! :)

Inertia

My best point is 560 in TOEIC.

My best score in TOEIC is 560.
I will take the examination again in October.
I will memorize many problems and answers.

I will be taking the examination again in October.  In order to prepare, I will be memorizing many problems and answers.

In order to get high point, the method according to test form is effective.

According to the test form, this method is effective for getting a high score.
However, this method falls into inertia easily.

However, I fall into inertia easily using this method.
So I wonder, why am I studying by such a method?

In any case, if my points increase, I will have confidence.  
Anyhow, if the point increases, I will have confidence.
It is trying to have confidence to English.

Note:  do you mean:  I am trying to have confidence in English.

or, do you mean:  It is difficult to have confidence in English.
Now, is the confidence true?

But, is this confidence real?
The confidence is transient.

The confidence is temporary.

A repetition of [Inertia→transient confidence→Inertia] may make real confidence.

The repetition of
It seems that small snow ball is rolled and it is made big snow ball.

It's as if a small snow ball is rolling and it will become a big snow ball.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English ,because I will attend IELTS in 9.22 and I also want to improve

I am learning English, because I will be attending IELTS starting September 22nd, and I want to improve my English skills.  My native language is Chinese, and I grew up in China.  I enjoy talking with others and listening to music.

my English skills. My native language is Chinese ,and I grew up in China .I enjoy talking with others and listening music.