Please help me correct this.

Hello everyone. I know Chinese is really poor. I'm trying to improve it by practicing but I'm a long ways away. Can you help me correct this? Thank you.

I want to say this:

Hello Everyone. My name is Michael. I began learning Chinese several weeks ago. My friends ask me if it's hard. I say that Chinese is hare, but I really like it. My wife is name Karla. We live in Hawaii. We came to Hawaii 3 months ago. She is a doctor. I work in a computer store. I work there because really like technology. In fact, next week I'm going to buy an iPhone. I can't wait!

This is how I wrote it in Chinese.

你好人人。我叫michael。几个星期学了中文。我的朋友常问我中文难不难。我说中文难可是我真的很喜欢。

我的太太叫Karla。我们在夏威夷住了三个月了。

我太太是大夫。我在电脑商店工作。我在商店喜欢工作可是我真喜欢技术。其实我下周会买iphone。我等不及了！


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