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I would like to learn not only Japanese but also it culture, because i hope one day i can travel there using Japanese instead of English. I'm a Chinese native speaker, and also speak fluently in English, so if anyone is interested in these languages or wants to make friends with me, just message me !
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    假日///////

    你好!
    (由於)今天是假日~所以我一直睡到了下午三點........（‐ｍ‐）

    // Because today is holiday, so u sleep until 3 o'clock in the afternoon. Actually, i think that u maybe want to express that u sleep a lot until 3pm owing to the reason of holiday. However, for me, i don't really use 睡懶覺 these three characters all together, or i would rewrite this sentence to "由於今天是假日, 所以我慵懶地睡到了下午三點", using 慵懶地 to represent the situation written in the song The lazy song of Bruno Mars "Today i feel don't like doing anything, i just want to lay in my bed". Sorry that he is one of my favorite singer, so i also suggest this to u if u haven't heard it)


    italki很有意思
    謝謝大家訂正我的Note book

    語言學習真的很難
    進步(得, adv., using to modify verb)很慢  
    不過(能夠, can)跟外國人用外語聊天很開心
    尤其(特別, especially)是用中文! 

    明天又(again)要上班
    真的很辛苦......那大家呢??

     

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    Although i don't know how long do u learn Chinese, i think u have good potential to make progress in this language especiall if u listen to more songs of Bruno Mars, haha! Oh, i think i can suggest u some singers, and it maybe will help u pratice ur listening or just cultivate the feeling toward Chinese. I will recommend my idol - Kenji Wu, and u can find some of his songs on Youtube if u want.

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    September 2, 2012
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    i miss u,Taiwan


    今年(This year)的(Like "me->mine", using to represnt the belonging)八月十二號, 我去了台灣 // just suggest to tell the time more specifically 

     

    那裡(There)有很多(many/much, using to emphasize. They are not necessary, but we often include them in our sentence)吸引我的地方 (In ur edition, u use 吸引(attract, Verb)力(power, noun), it is regarded as a noun, like a kind of invisble power. On the contrary, in my way, i think of  吸引 as a verb. Therefore, u can use it in different way!)

     

    讓我有去台灣留學的想法-----!

    (It gives me an idea that i hope that i can go to school over there someday in the future. Overhere, i think that u must be attracted by something, so it gives u an idea or desire to visit here again, so that's why i connect the meaning of last sentence to write this one to make them more coherent.) 


    期待下一次再度造訪(visit, u can also replace it as 拜訪, but both of them are really formal way)台灣,,,!!

    (I'm really looking forward to my next visit in Taiwan)

    我要努力學習中文!!

     

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    In my opinion, actually, i think u have already expressed the meaning u want to tell us. However, considering the coherence, u still have a lot of room to improve, but i think u will make progress if u keep typing more. BTW ~ i'm so glad that u have visited my place just few weeks ago and go back with good mood. Looking forward to ur next visit here in Taiwan !   

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    September 2, 2012
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