Becoming a Rich Man is Very Easy. Part Four:

The carpenter's brother did lent to him, a set of tools for work, which Jacob paid to them for with his first weekly payment. After he saved almost all his money, which he gained, earned, and in two weeks, already he did began to lent lend money, with an interest at 10 percent per week, and with a guarantee of some garment item like: watches, radio recorders, phones, rings, or jackets to other workers who wasted her their money at the week's end. And If they no did not paid pay to him in two weeks, then he did put the garment for sale at bargain price. All this for was to recover their the investments that he did make made in the loans.

Excellent story.  I look forward to Part Five. You know more English than I know Spanish!

Becoming a Rich Man is Very Easy. Part Three:

Whereas, While Jacob was searching for some work, he stayed with their his brothers, who were living at an of the seelproms (¿Qué es esto?) of the workplace, so he was occupied in homeworks chores like: clean the room, wash the dress clothes, cook the food. and also He walked by the workplace and while he saw, with feelings of sadness, as  the people were working and how the time was ticking. He began to think, that the best thing to do was to return to her the town.
But her his luck changed, because a carpenter employer, whose name was named Antonio, who observed the sadness of the youth and ended for feeling felt compassion by for him, so he offered Jacob an employ a job as helper of her (his?) brother, called named Faust, who was a too very tall man. And it was curious to see this work couple couple work, because the Jacob's stature was only a little greater than the pants of Faust.(Faust's pants) 

Good work. I like this story.

Becoming a Rich Man is Very Easy - Part Two:

By end, After Jacob was became 18 years of age, and the next day, he did presence presented himself at to the government office, for their voter registation process,. and  One time, with his card in her hand, he arrivied at the place, where their his brothers were working,. so, He was presented by the brothers, with  to the employers, for to be employed, but they said, "Jacob is too small". Then he protested showing his card, however, the job was denied.
Jacob was frustrated, their his brothers said to him, "You must return with our parents". But he did deny refused to return at her to the town, and he said to them, "I want to work here at in the city". Then he searched for work at other places, but the employ he continued being to be denied.

Becoming a rich man is very easy. Part One

Jacob is a small man, physically. When he was a child he lived at her in a town, which is a land mainly of poor farmers, and there his major older brothers did going to went to work at the capitol of her the country, he stayed in her the town, because the kid job is forbidden , legally illegal, and fortunately this law is accomplished, by the economic help, that the government gives the poor families.
So, while he was hoping to have waiting to be 18 years of age, for to go work, with their his brothers, who worked in the building industry, Jacob heard to of an old man, who did indicated to youths, how to progress as an immigrant

El amarillo es corrección.

This is good. I hope I helped.