First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hey all!

Let's see how many mistakes I'm gonna do make in my first entry.

I'm Luis, from Santiago of Chile. I'm 26 years old and I'm at the university studying Pedagogy (I'll become a Spanish Language teacher). I love languages, but I think that my knowledge of them is kinda disperse: I know some English, but not that well yet, Italian a little bit, etc. This place emerges like a great opportunity to learn in an easy way and communicate (and to meet) people from all over the world. One of my hobbies (and dreams) is to travel a lot. I think the world is a big country, a big nation, and all human beings have the right to explore it and to know different people and cultures. That clearly enriches us in so many aspects. I'm currently saving money to go inside and outside my homeland and start a new adventure!

What about me? Well, I'm a writer, a poet. Love writing: a poem, novels and stories. Obviously, I do it better in Spanish than in English (in fact, I feel that I'm not ready to write in English yet) If you wanna read some of my work, let me know: that would be so nice.

I enjoy going out with friends and to drink beer, talk, have fun, listening to music, etc. My taste on music is very variated, but I enjoy a lot the rock in general (from progressive, classic, folk, punk rock... to hardcore, crust, death metal, etc)

Well, that's it for now. Thanks for reading this!

This is very, very good.  If you have any questions about my corrections, let me know! 

Oh, and thanks for the corrections on my entry!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hey all!

Let's see how many mistakes i'm gonna do in my first entry.

I'm Luis, from Santiago of Chile. I'm 26 years old and i'm at the university studying Pedagogy (i'll become a Spanish Language teacher) I Love languages but i think that my knowledge of them is kinda disperse: i know some English but not that well yet, Italian a little bit, etc. This place emerges like a great opportunity to learn in an easy way and to communicate (and to meet) people from all over the world. One of my hobbies (and dream) is to travel a lot. I think the world is a big country, a big nation, and all human beings have the right to explore it and to know different people and cultures. That clearly enriches us in so many aspects. I'm currently saving money to go inside and outside my homeland and start a new adventure! 

What about me? Well, i'm a writer, a poet. Love writing: a poem, novels and stories. Obviously i do it better in Spanish than in English (in fact, i feel that i'm not ready to write en English yet) If you wanna read some of my work, let me know: that would be so nice. 

I enjoy going out with friends and drink beer, talk, have fun, listening to music, etc. My taste on music is very variated, but i enjoy a lot the rock in general (from progressive, classic, folk, punk rock... to hardcore, crust, death metal, etc)

Well, that's it for now. Thanks for reading this!

You have a very good English, your text has only a few mistakes: after verbs like enjoy, want and like you use a verb in the continous tense (ing) to transform it in a noum to represent the action. Keep up the good work!:-)