Sunshine Please help me correct the writing! Shines right to my heart. Live starts to breath, Eager for the new experience, To discover and to explore the new day. In the rays of light, I see my past, my present And my future, all-in-one, With full of hope loaded in it. Then, the sunshine tells to My faded soul to rise. I feel the healing at the sight of it. I see the new chapter comin' to my life. Touch it, feel it, live it, To the light which is in you!

Please someone correct the writing below! Thank you! It is say that life is just like an egg. Any objects falls on the egg, it can break or spoil so easily. Carefully, we handle the eggs not to break. Like wise, God has taken care of us and handling us, keeping us safe from any of the dangerous things that surrounds us. In the blink of an eye or in a minute, anything can happen and that could be the end for you and me. And we never know what could happen to you and me. . As we know life is unpredictable, we must learn to embrace the moment . Our physical bodies are weak and fragile but Christ has made us strong and this evening we all are here safe and sound, so blessed by God and like the hens that gathered her chicks around her cozy wings, God has gathered us here under His wings. Glory be to the Lord Almighty!

Is it correct to say " what do you studying?"

Can I say, "a very good evening and a warm welcome to each of you present here this evening?"

Glimpses of dawn scene. Help me correct the paragraph! Cock is their time-teller. As the cock crows in dawn, Women were quite alert ; They woke up to the crows alarm. And soon, the house was filled with liveliness_ Smokes going up the chimneys, Chickens clamourously pacing around Unless they are being fed.

I have a question. Can we use more and a word that ends with "er "just after the word more? For eg : more and more stronger or more darker. Please tell me whether it's correct or wrong to use in that way!

Befalls'Unity Please someone correct the little piece of writings below. Thanks to whoever corrects it! Clouds beginning to get dark And darker as new day arrrives. The usual normal raindrops Has now turned to blackdrops. It overflows the city, The people consumed it And the bitterness taste, Poisoned the people sick. Trees too has fade away. It leaves a horrible mark; Of pale, fragile and sick. I saw no not a single leaf Of which the trees hesitate To face the passers-by, For he bears the nakedness. Then, I heard the dreadful cry Of the innocent sheep Which to my surprise, all has Turned to an arrogant black sheep. I was wonderin' and pondering Over the horrifying scenes; Then, late night, I realized, The unity in society has lost. But then, I saw a little Bright corner in each hearts, Eagerly waitin' to brighten them up. Then, it taught me - Being togetherness Can heal the befallen unity.

The Brookside Please help me out correct my English. Thanks in advance! Just as simple as that, A tree by the brookside; Cool, calm, solitary yet so energetic Standing medium with thick Evergreen splendid leaves Bending slightly by the brook, Depicting one's avail for the other. I could sense the dear bond Between the two lovers; So deep in love, in loyalty, And truth upon each other. The brook, almost spotless, Too fresh to quench my thirst Presents me to a state of relief To my life's battles of pain and lonelines. Then, the true living sights Of the two significant nature's, Speaks me of a friendship message! Thus, I felt more the need of God, My source, into my life's journey. It guarantees me for ever happiness, When true relationship occurs, As that of the tree and the brook does.

The Sunset Please, help me correct my English. Thank you! The moment where I feel I'm not permanent in this world. Did you see, my dear? The scarlet hovering wall Awaiting every piece On this earth to suck up! Lo, the end is finally here! But as we hope for tomorrow, Nay, my dear, it's not Truly the end yet. But for sure, someday, It will take us up to an abode Where there's never ending (no, not of fairytale), But of everlasting life with God.