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Befalls'Unity Please someone correct the little piece of writings below. Thanks to whoever corrects it! Clouds beginning to get dark And darker as new day arrrives. The usual normal raindrops Has now turned to blackdrops. It overflows the city, The people consumed it And the bitterness taste, Poisoned the people sick. Trees too has fade away. It leaves a horrible mark; Of pale, fragile and sick. I saw no not a single leaf Of which the trees hesitate To face the passers-by, For he bears the nakedness. Then, I heard the dreadful cry Of the innocent sheep Which to my surprise, all has Turned to an arrogant black sheep. I was wonderin' and pondering Over the horrifying scenes; Then, late night, I realized, The unity in society has lost. But then, I saw a little Bright corner in each hearts, Eagerly waitin' to brighten them up. Then, it taught me - Being togetherness Can heal the befallen unity.

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