Please do a correction. Could you please make the sentenses below more nutural in English? ------------------------- 1. Please send an email with “Scholarship entry” included clearly. 2. Please submit yourself the documents below by e-mail before the deadline. 3. If you are an under-graduate student, you need to prepare a last year’s transcript. 4. Please submit the COE application before the deadline in order for applying for a visa. 5. If the documents are uncomplete or false, you may be not able to receive scholarship. ----------------------- In the first sentense, by the word 'yourself', I would like to mean that the person who applies need to send an e-mail, not any other person. And should I also say "within the period" instead of "before the deadline"? Thank you for your help!

Are the sentenses correct? Please correct the sentenses more nutural in English. -------------------- Entry Requirements ・An applicant who passed the JLPT (at least 4th level) and has a student visa. ・An applicant who has completed 12 years educational curriculum and should be under 28 years old. --------------------- My question is that which one is better to say 'An applicant' or 'Applicants'? Should I say '12 years of educational curriculum'? Thank you!

Which one is better? Could you tell me which sentense is more natural? How English classes in primary school have positive influence on students? How English classes in primary school positively influence on students? Is it better to use affect or effect instead of influence?

Writing Practice Please correct gramatical errors in follwing writing. Thank you, All of the words I put in the vocabulary list have been mentioned in the lecture. But I have not included in the summary, because other information are more important and worth being stated. In addition, some words such as liberator was used as synonym of freedom fighter in the topic. Therefore, I put priority on using the general word and the words that have been mentioned more frequently during the lecture.

Writing Practice This is part of my course work. I have written about international law. Please correct errors. Thnak you, The information in The Nestles’ infant formula controversy strongly link to the idea that international law is largely a product of states pursuing their own interest as well as a tool of powerful in the lecture. In 1970s, Nestlé has begun to sell infant formula aggressively in developing countries. The problem is that the illiteracy, poverty and unsanitary conditions caused the deaths of hundreds of infant (Stuckler & Nestle, 1994). Expanding Nestle’s business in the to The Third World countries has resulted in promoting the gaps between powerful countries and less powerful countries. International code of marketing of breast milk substitute (WHO, 1981) was established to regulate the Nestle or any other company’s behaviours in t to avoid the accusation from consumers. WHO’s efforts in 1990s with the International Health Regulations have been called a failure, and noncompliance with these regulations (Fidler, 1996). As findings on current research showed that the majority of formula-feeding mothers did not receive instruction on formula preparation or storage from a health professional (Labiner-Wolfe, Fein & Shealy, 2013), the code does not seem to be successful. Considering the malfunction of the WHO code, one of the possible solutions is introducing the new international laws which enable to fill the gaps in mothers’ education on safe infant formula. The new rules should not ignore human rights treaties, which is vital step to avoid the settled rules to be irrelevant mentioned in the lecture. In the According to The limit of International law( ), the authors claimed that the partisan discussion about the paradox of international law was hampered by lack of understanding about how international law really operates. The implication in order for the international law works properly is that the country should encourage inform consumers of how international law regulate the global business which deal with the infant formula. As a process of the enforcement, the international law should ensure that meaningful information about the correct handling of infant formula, for example. (327words)

Writing Practice This is part of my wrting assignment. Please correct gramatical errors. Thank you, ●Selection of the words　１ The most of the words on vocabulary list are appeared in the first few of slides to ensure that the words are mentioned in the lecture. I particularly intended to select the words relating the structure of system of international law, mixing both high frequent and low frequent used words. The similar kind of words that are used in the specific meanings in the lecture ware also included such as institution and organisation. In order to clear my understandings before the lecture, the definition and statements are organised simply and concisely. ●Selection of the words　２ All the word put on the vocabulary list come from slides that have been provided before the lecture. I chose the wide range of words that directly and indirectly link to the main topic of terrorism. More nouns are focused on than any other grammatical structures, because the lecture included some expertises and some of them mean the specific group of people. I intended to understand how respective words are used in the ideas of the lecture. This effort had led me to use the same meaning of words in the example statements. Most of words have been appeared in the materials for preparation.

Synonym or Antonym of International war Is there any synonym or antonym of international war? I think civil war can be one of the antonym, but I am not sure. International war can be the war between tow counties. How do you say war within one country? Thank you,

Presentation Script This is one part of presentation script. I hope you to correct gramatical errors. Thank you, 7. Labelling System As we looked in the table earlier, the problem is there are many many mothers do not read the information on the packages. Where does that lead us? Printing informative instruction on packages can be another remedy, because we support the claim that FOL, which stands for Front of Package Labelling, is a potentially vital communication tool for public health, There are a variety of powder milk products have been sold in huge global markets, But few of them have printed warnings of the importance of following the directions on their packages. In order to avoid the incorrect handling of infant formula, it is extremely important to develop the labelling system which includes a warning statement that cautions their infant’s health. On the other hand, illiterate consumers in the Third World cannot receive sufficient benefits from written massages. One solution for this situation is that adapting picture-based warnings. Ok, that’s all I wanted to say about the further protection.