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Please do a correction. Could you please make the sentenses below more nutural in English? ------------------------- 1. Please send an email with “Scholarship entry” included clearly. 2. Please submit yourself the documents below by e-mail before the deadline. 3. If you are an under-graduate student, you need to prepare a last year’s transcript. 4. Please submit the COE application before the deadline in order for applying for a visa. 5. If the documents are uncomplete or false, you may be not able to receive scholarship. ----------------------- In the first sentense, by the word 'yourself', I would like to mean that the person who applies need to send an e-mail, not any other person. And should I also say "within the period" instead of "before the deadline"? Thank you for your help!

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1. Please email us your statement of financial support (I suppose that's what you mean by Scholarship entry) 2. Please submit the documents below (by yourself) within the application period (saying "before the deadline" is okay I suppose) 3. If you are currently an undergraduate student (not under-graduate), please send us your past academic performance. 4. Please submit the COE application before the deadline in order to apply for a visa (not in order for) 5. If the documents are incomplete or false, you may not be able to receive the scholarship. (or perhaps you could say: the scholarship will become invalid) Hope this helps.

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