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English writing practice 2
Once Mrs.Jennifer asked Winslet what she wanted to do the most in the future,Winslet answered it without hesitation that she wanted to be an actor just like her parents , though she wanted to be a superstar and to get Oscar .
Mrs.Jennifer nodded favourably ,smiling and combing the little girl's hair.
When the flowers which are planted in early spring start showing off of grace, misfortune comes quietly.There is a lump on Winslet's neck as big as the egg of a Dove .Her parents are so busy that they take Winslet to the best hospital in Berkshire for treatment immediately.
The doctor's conclusion is that it is a benign tumor early ,an operation will solve the problem.But the doctor's schedule is full,so Winslet's operation will be performed next week.
When Winslet comes home,she becomes slient and self-closing because she's afraid of the surgery .She won't go to Kindergarten or go to Mrs.Jennifer's place.
Q:I don't know how to use "or" ,for example "He will not want to play basketball or to watch movie alone"can I say"He will not want to play basketball or watch movie alone "Do I need to put "to"after "or",I know if there is only a v. before or I can say "I don't like to eat eggs or ham",it's confusing,thank you :)
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English writing practise'
It's a moving article which i read on Chinese exam paper ,it's a novel .Now I'm translating it into English . And yesterday I posted it in the wrong place .
Title: Don't Touch The Most Beautiful Flower In The World
Winslet is a beautiful British girl,she has a long curly hair , a lovely face with big shining blue eyes ,long eyelash flash and a sweet voice .When she smiles ,just like the bloom of a flower .Everyone likes her. People in the same block nicely call her "The Angel of Reading".
Reading is a precinct of Berkshire ,people feel comfortable in four seasons ,flowers and trees decorate the streets.As results, there are often many people moving in .and settle down here .This spring ,An old woman moved in the house which just at the left of the Winslets' House.
After a few days ,people have noticed that that old woman lives alone . She seems very lonely so that you can always find her taking a walk by herself or shopping in the stores near by or basking in the sun just in front the door of her own house .She don't even have a pet .People are busy that no one would stop the steps in front of her door .
However ,the old woman drew Winslet's attention ,because she is as lonely as the old woman more or less.Winslet's parents are professional actors ,keep busying is their lifestyle .Everyday after the class and finish her homework ,she'll come to the old woman's place,she tell the funny things happened in school to the old woman ,the she can hear good stories.Especially on weekends ,they have more time to spend .The old woman is Mrs.Jennifer ,a widow ,only have a nephew .
Because the company of Winslet ,Mrs.Jennifer feels the spring is unusually bright and beautiful ,Winslet feels the same way .
It's a part of the novel ,and a Q : how should i write the title ,all capital letters ?thank you :)
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English writing practise
It's a moving article which i read on Chinese exam paper ,it's a novel .Now I'm translating it into English .
Title: Don't Touch The Most Beautiful Flower In The World
Winslet is a beautiful British girl,she has a long curly hair , a lovely face with big shining blue eyes ,long eyelash flash and a sweet voice .When she smiles ,just like the bloom of a flower .Everyone likes her. People in the same block nicely call her "The Angel of Reading".
Reading is a precinct of Berkshire ,people feel comfortable in four seasons ,flowers and trees decorate the streets.As results, there are often many people moving in .and settle down here .This spring ,An old woman moved in the house which just at the left of the Winslets' House.
After a few days ,people have noticed that that old woman lives alone . She seems very lonely so that you can always find her taking a walk by herself or shopping in the stores near by or basking in the sun just in front the door of her own house .She don't even have a pet .People are busy that no one would stop the steps in front of her door .
However ,the old woman drew Winslet's attention ,because she is as lonely as the old woman more or less.Winslet's parents are professional actors ,keep busying is their lifestyle .Everyday after the class and finish her homework ,she'll come to the old woman's place,she tell the funny things happened in school to the old woman ,the she can hear good stories.Especially on weekends ,they have more time to spend .The old woman is Mrs.Jennifer ,a widow ,only have a nephew .
Because the company of Winslet ,Mrs.Jennifer feels the spring is unusually bright and beautiful ,Winslet feels the same way .
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Staying Up
Hi ,my name's xin ,i am a high school student ,first grade.Now i am on winter holiday ,well ,i was planning to read some books and spend some time studying school knowledge. But turns out i just can't stick to it ,i guess i end up at that all the time ,sometimes i think i can do anything that takes time and need to make up my mind .i like to watch american TV shows ,i love <Modern Family>,it's also very late now .now i am on the fence about if i am gonna stay up all night because thought i usually sleep very late but my uncle will visit and take my little sister(cousin) his home ,and i get up very late these days .i don't have to worry that the cat will be out of the bag ,because no one will leave me holding the bag ,well ,i will .haha,just using the phrase ,new year is coming ,i know i will watch the shows on channel CCTV1 the whole night at Spring Festival.not whole night ,it's midnight .Hope everyone 's happy learning languages :D
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