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English writing practise It's a moving article which i read on Chinese exam paper ,it's a novel .Now I'm translating it into English . Title: Don't Touch The Most Beautiful Flower In The World Winslet is a beautiful British girl,she has a long curly hair , a lovely face with big shining blue eyes ,long eyelash flash and a sweet voice .When she smiles ,just like the bloom of a flower .Everyone likes her. People in the same block nicely call her "The Angel of Reading". Reading is a precinct of Berkshire ,people feel comfortable in four seasons ,flowers and trees decorate the streets.As results, there are often many people moving in .and settle down here .This spring ,An old woman moved in the house which just at the left of the Winslets' House. After a few days ,people have noticed that that old woman lives alone . She seems very lonely so that you can always find her taking a walk by herself or shopping in the stores near by or basking in the sun just in front the door of her own house .She don't even have a pet .People are busy that no one would stop the steps in front of her door . However ,the old woman drew Winslet's attention ,because she is as lonely as the old woman more or less.Winslet's parents are professional actors ,keep busying is their lifestyle .Everyday after the class and finish her homework ,she'll come to the old woman's place,she tell the funny things happened in school to the old woman ,the she can hear good stories.Especially on weekends ,they have more time to spend .The old woman is Mrs.Jennifer ,a widow ,only have a nephew . Because the company of Winslet ,Mrs.Jennifer feels the spring is unusually bright and beautiful ,Winslet feels the same way .

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oh~i posted it at the wrong place.i'll repost it .
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It's just a part of the novel .And a Q:should i use capital word to write the whole title ? Thank you :)

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