Translating a poem to chinese
I'm studying chinese, and I need to translate a poem. I want to know if my translation is correct. Thanks !
AGAINST THE DAY ( Poem by César Fernandez Moreno )
针对旦
Again the rosters with that scandal
再次公鸡与那件丑闻
Again the day wanting to start
天又想要开始
Pouring its insidious light
挹在其阴险光
Ah, but do not count on me
啊,但别指望我
I am indifferent to the maniacal impulse of the time
我忘情对时间的慌乱冲动
If it wants to be a pyramid I will not be its base
如果它想成为金字塔,我不会其底边
I belong to the previous night
我属于前的晚上
Here I remain, horizontally resistant
在这里我置身,卧式 抗 性
Bumping pillows, chewing feathers
撞枕头,咀嚼羽毛
Pampered by the shadow.
影子被宠了。
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Poem is the most difficult one in translation. I admire your courage! I've translated an ancient chinese poem into english once as well. I know how it feels...
Here is some advice
雄鸡的怒鸣再一次划破天际
朝阳开启这新的一天
倾倒它晦涩的光芒
啊,但不要指望会为其所动
我一直漠然于时间狂热的脉搏
如果时间欲成为金字塔,我绝不为其做底基
我心属昨夜的月色
在这里,与时间平行,争斗不止
把枕头扔向空中,咀嚼羽毛
纵情地沉溺在黑暗的笼罩之中
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上半:
公鸡又在丢人的啼,
白天又再阴险地
悄悄地侵蚀黑夜。
啊!别指望我会来,
时间那股疯狂向前的冲动,我不会理会的,
它要建立它在历史上伟大的功业,那像金字塔般大而无当的功业,别来把我牺牲。
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诗要说的是: "什么太阳出来了,天天向上,我全部不要!"
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题目译做"抗拒白天"吧。
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关于(2), 意思是:
我是属于前一夜的
我躺在这里,不要起来,坚决抗拒
黏着枕头
在黑暗的怀抱里,享受它的爱宠
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