We're on holiday in Zagreb, a town in Croatia, and it's a very beautiful town. Our hotel is nice — new and comfortable. The people are very friendly. The food is delicious and the wine is lovely. The weather is hot and sunny at the beach every day.

Hi Max I find your letter to be very good I just a notice a few corrections We`re on holiday in Zagreb a town in Croatia and it`s a very beautiful town. Our hotel is nice, new and comfortable. The people are very friendly. The food is delicious and the wine is lovely. The weather is hot and sunny at the beach everyday. If you are enumerating please use a comma instead of a dash, for example " our hotel is nice - new and comfortable. It should be " our hotel is nice, new and comfortable. Have a great day!