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The Internet Is Not a Good Way to Find Information
Many people believe that the Internet is a good way to get useful information, but I think that it is not a good way to acquire information for the following main reason: the public’s ability to contribute content. This feature of the Internet causes it to have not only a tremendous level of good information, but also a fair amount of wrong information. With today's easy access, virtually any person can post their comments, opinions, and knowledge even though they are not educated, an expert, nor an intellectual.
It may seem that the widespread sharing of information will always be beneficial, yet, the downside to that ability may also lead to people easily receiving faulty information. Thus, time permitting, they will need to verify whether the information that they find there is correct or not. If they do not have such time, or they are unable to verify it independently through their own knowledge, people often believe that incorrect information is right simply because it exists on the Internet.
However, while that is happening less and less these days, the bigger issue is those people who unwittingly believe that the wrong information is correct, and who all too often, then spread this wrong information further. In this respect, and for this reason, while not discounting it's other advantages, this is why I feel that the Internet is frequently a good source to find bad information.
Hi, Geumhui. Good job! Whatever minor changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your ideas, for ease of reading, and to provide a slightly better ending. My apologies if I misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you. J.
P.S. In answer to your question, I believe that in U.S. publications (which I would be more familiar with…), the capitalized form (Internet) continues to be more common that the non-capitalized form (internet). It is also the form I encounter more of here on italki. In contrast, and perhaps reflecting the British influence, the reverse is used and gaining wider usage elsewhere. An old rule in writing is to “know your audience,” so with that in mind, you should know the limitations of those who volunteer to edit your posts here as well.
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