A dream of red masions
As far as i am concerned,A dream of red marsions is superior to any other book i have ever read.It is a famous book in China.It was adapted for televersion in 1987.It gradually has become more popular.
There are three reasons for my preferance for A dream of red masions.First of all,these stories made great impression on me（or these stories in the book which made great impression on me.）
In addition,the contents and the meaning it conveys also attract my attention.
Thanks to this book,I have learned that the love story between daiyu and baoyu.
Last but not least,the structure is excellent.And it is presented to readers through a series of independent but coherient stories.
For these reasons given above, i took great interest in the novel which has been listed as one of The Four Great Classic Novels of Chinese literature.
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 4
0
Thanks to this the book, I came to know of had learned that the love story between Daiyu and Baoyu.
Finally Last but not least, the structuring of the storyline is excellent._And Its is present to readers complicated main plot is conveyed through a series of independent but coherient subplotsstories.
Finally Last but not least, the structuring of the storyline is excellent._And Its is present to readers complicated main plot is conveyed through a series of independent but coherient subplotsstories.
For these reasons given above, i took great interest in the No wonder, this novel which has been is considered listed as one of the four great classics Novels of in Chinese literature. or, "... is one of the Four Great Classic Novels in ..."
"_" 空位
0
As far as I am concerned, A To me, the "Dream of the Red Chamber" marsions is superior far better to any other book I "非 大写不可 had ever read._It is a famous Chinese book in China. 不止於中国and it was adapted for a televersion series in 1987._Its popularity has gradually increased has became more popular.
In addition,the contents and the meaning it conveys also attract my attention. On a closer look, they convey a much deeper meaning and opened my eyes greatly.
0
I read the book and I liked it a lot too, although I think I would need to read it again (or more times) to really appreciate it. As you say liked the amazing variety of stories. The way they so excitedly partipated in the poetry writing and how it contrasted with their circumstances. The book has a lot of levels. Problably some are not really appreciated by non-Chinese.
0
A dream of red masions
As far as I am concerned,1* A dream of red marsions is superior to any other book I have ever read.It is a famous book in China. It was adapted for televersion television2* in 1987.It gradually has become more popular.
There are three reasons for my preferance for A dream of red masions.First of all,these stories made great a deep impression on me（or these there are stories in the book which made great a deep impression on me.）
In addition,the contents3* and the meaning it conveys also attract my attention.
Thanks to this book, I have learned that of 4* the love story between Daiyu and Baoyu.
Last but not least,the structure is excellent. And it is presented to readers through a series of independent but coherient 5* stories.
For these reasons given above, I took great interest in 6* the novel which has been listed as one of The Four Great Classic Novels of Chinese literature.
1* - I would prefer another expression here to talk about a work of art. 'As far as I'm concerned' to me sounds more like an opinion on an issue. To be honest though, personally I don't use it. Here I would have said 'In my opinion'
2* is this a typo or a modern expression ? To me the expression is 'adapted for television'. Maybe some people use 'televersion' but I've never heard of it.
3* in a book 'contents' means the list of chapters - not the subject/ type of book
4* or -learned about - but I think 'of' is better here. I would prefer 'I was moved by the love story between Daiyu and Baoyu'.
5- Coherent or connected?
6* I think -take interest ii - shows more participation in activities or movements. Here I would prefer - I enjoyed / loved / was excited by...
Don't forget to capitalise I and names and a space after full stops.
Very nice use of connecting expressions- all perfectly used so that the content is clearly explained.
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
