About watching movies in cinemas ① In surverys / interviews about hobbies, "I like watching movies' is included in common answers. Both are a normal question and normal answer. However, I observe/find that there are many people around me who seldom watch movies, and even don't go to cinemas throughout the year. As far as I know, whether or not you watch movies depends on individual interest. But what about watching movies in cinemas? Personally, I prefer to go to cinemas as long as there are movies that attract/interest me. Why? Firstly, the cinema provides me a non -interrupted environment so that I could/can enjoy watching a movie well. A movie usually lasts about two hours, I take this as an opportunity to practice my concentration on things. Secondly, the audiovisual equipment in the cinemas is usually better, which can bring me a nicer atmosphere and experience while watching. Thirdly, I like to support my favorite actors and actresses by helping contribute to ticket sales. In a word, watching movies in cinemas is common to me in my daily life. As a movie lover, not only do I like watching, I like writing feedback for those movies I have seen as well. My feedback includes commenting to the film and giving rates upon recommendation. These are shared in daily conversations or on social-media platforms. I know there are some movie lovers who prefer to watch films at home for comfort and convenience merits, sometimes the economic factor is considered as well. However, what confuses me the most is those skeptical judgements on the others' recommendations.

There is an old Chinese saying that says" dragons' children are definitely dragons, and mice's children can burrow congenitally". This saying tells us/ The meaning is that a family environment has the biggest influence on children's growth*1/development. When children go to kindergarten, they don't have obvious difference between/with/to each other, but when they are in their elementary school life, something becomes different. A few/some of them are sensitive, lack confidence and are offensive*2. No matter, how the teachers help them, they can't change anymore and even get worse, both through academic and social contact which makes their teachers concerned about their development. When the teachers try to figure out the reasons why these children aren't able to grow positively they are suprised to find that most of these children's parents have bad habits. They are addicted to gambling or alcohol, and even their families suffer domestic violence. These children are scolded by their parents almost everyday. They grow up under much stress and neglect, unitl one day they begin to use violence to hurt others. So, I hope the governments can protect the children who are suffering from unhealthy family education by improving the laws. Let all the parents know that their children are their toys*3/ treasures(?). They must be reponsible for their children's growth. Otherwise, they must be punished by the law.

I think that the purpose of asking children to wear school uniform is to reduce the comparisons about/of/between clothes. After all, if children have the right to choose what they want to wear, you can see a variety of colourful clothes at school of different qualities and prices. As a consequence, many children who come from a poor family might get diffident and lose confidence. We know that schools are the places for studying. Teachers and parents are supposed to create an ideal atmosphere for every students without them being distracted by other things/problems. So, having a school uniform is the best way to help children (to be focused) focus on studying. But the disadvantages of a school uniform are also obvious. When a school decides on which kind of school uniform should be chosen they usually consider/take into account the children's income level to make sure everyone can afford the school uniform. In that case, the quality of school uniforms is often ingored which causes some children to easily get cold in the freezing winter days.

As the temperature drops down to minus 10 degrees, many things become hard to do. Especially in the/ on a freezing morning, it's not a good idea to go to work on foot in the cold wind. The best choice is to walk to your car ,and get in it as quickly as possible. But there are some people who are not as happy as they were in the summer mornings. Because when they start their electric vehicles, the screen shows that they need to charge their cars. And they just charged their cars two days ago. This is very different from summer. In summer, they just need to charge their cars once a week for 350-400 kilometers on average. But this is the only disadvantage I can think of about/with/for electric vehicles. If you buy a very expensive electric car whose endurance/range limit can reach up to 1000 kilometers, you are able to easily sort out the problem.

A relationship is a... ...to choose a person to start a relationship with. My family say - here they are family as individuals, not a unit eg my family is large. devote efforts - is unusual but possible. For a native speaker the usual collocation would be 'make efforts', maybe 'devote time/energy and make an effort to ' 'turn out into a marriage ' sounds colloquial. Usually 'turn out as marrige' or 'turn into a marriage'. Clearly explained and very well corrected. The closing sentence is excellent.

Not sure how to correct here in the app. Has the system changed again? I would prefer just -...in Henan province, China last week. In the past week- sounds more like -during the last week. Eg. A lot has happened in the past week. Here you want to specify the time. Built in 68 AD in Eastern Han Dynasty, Here I would prefer -during the Eastern Han Dynasty,- although 'in' is also possible. Dynasties should have an article, like centuries. Best use of vocabulary Now it boasts its numerous historic sites. Also could be more simply Now it boasts numerous historic sites. And Religious beliefs provide a framework for how we ... I like the mix of historical detail and personal reflection.

The favorite moment with my dog is everyday he comes to me happily when I get home. And I also like the moments when we spend weekends together on the sofa peacefully. My dog is a small, cute dog. He is timid outside but a little devil at home. I feel happy every time I play with my dog.