Compositions in Chinese
大家好
I've written several compositions with 2-3 sentences each for a language challenge. Every composition answers a question.
Would be grateful if you could check it and point out the mistakes.
1. What language have you chosen for a challenge and why?
我今年要学习汉语。汉语很漂亮。我想去中国，也跟中国朋友谈普通话。
2. What other languages do you learn?
我学习汉语。 我会说英语和韩语。我在学校 学习德语，现在 부会说德语.
3. What's your job?
我工作是 游戏设计师。 我在家工作。我爱我工作.
4. Choose 3-4 adjectives to characterize your job.
我的工作太有意思。它也使我满意，但是 现在工钱不好.
5. How do you work?
我在家工作。 我每周有工作的任务。我抽空儿， 任务按时完成。
6. What qualities do you need for your job?
慧，有心眼儿，有创造力的人这个工作能做很好。管理员工的本领很重要。
7. How did you spend your weekend?
周六我做汉语作业了。周日我去健身房，锻炼身体了。我也看了电影和买了菜。
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Compositions in Chinese
大家好I've written several compositions with 2-3 sentences each for a language challenge. Every composition answers a question.
Would be grateful if you could check it and point out the mistakes.
1. What language have you chosen for a challenge and why?
我今年要学习汉语。汉语很漂亮。我想去中国，也跟中国朋友谈讲普通话。
2. What other languages do you learn?
我学习汉语。 我会说英语和韩语。我在学校学习了德语，现在 부会说德语.。
3. What's your job?
我工作是游戏设计师。 我在家工作。我爱我工作.。
4. Choose 3-4 adjectives to characterize your job.
我的工作太很有意思。它也使我满意，但是现在工钱（工资/薪水）不好高.
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题目上要求使用形容词(adj.)描述你的工作(n.)
The qustion request you use adjective to characterize your job(noun)，
下面的句型会更符合要求
The following sentence patterns will be more appropriate.
"这是一个 （adj）的工作"
eg.
1.这是一个有趣的工作
2.这是一个满意的工作
3.这是一个低薪的工作
在这个句式里，“的”字前面使用形容词，来描述“的”字之后的名词。
In this sentence pattern, adjectives are used before the word "的" to describe the nouns after the word "的".
但是我很喜欢你灵活的回答，因为在生活中用中文交流并不需要像回答考试问题一样规范。但这是一个好的方式去更好的学习中文的语法。
But I like your flexible answers very much, because use Chinese to communicate with other person does not need to be as standard as answering exam questions,but it's a nice way to learn Chinese grammer better.
To be continued........
5. How do you work?
我在家工作。 我每周有工作的任务。我抽空儿， 任务按时完成。
6. What qualities do you need for your job?
慧，有心眼儿，有创造力的人这个工作能做很好。管理员工的本领很重要。
7. How did you spend your weekend?
周六我做汉语作业了。周日我去健身房，锻炼身体了。我也看了电影和买了菜。
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Compositions in Chinese
大家好I've written several compositions with 2-3 sentences each for a language challenge. Every composition answers a question.
Would be grateful if you could check it and point out the mistakes.
1. What language have you chosen for a challenge and why?
我今年要学习汉语。汉语很 漂亮 优美。我想去中国，也想跟中国朋友 谈 说普通话。
2. What other languages do you learn?
我学习汉语。 我会说英语和韩语。我在学校 学习过德语，现在 부 已经会说德语.
3. What's your job?
我工作是 游戏设计师。 我在家工作。我爱我的工作.
4. Choose 3-4 adjectives to characterize your job.
我的工作 太很有意思。它也使我很满意，但是 现在工钱 工资不好.
5. How do you work?
我在家工作。 我每周有工作的任务。我抽空儿， 把任务按时完成。
6. What qualities do you need for your job?
聪慧，有心眼儿有思考力，有创造力的人能够把这个工作能做得很好。管理员工的本领很重要。
7. How did you spend your weekend?
周六我做了汉语作业了。周日我去了健身房，锻炼身体了。我也看了电影和买了菜。
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