First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I was born in a beautiful citiy,which located in Hunan province in China.last month I just finished my college life ,and seek for a job now, I want to make more friends and be will to do my best to help anybody .otherwise I like to learn english not only due to my work needed but it is my favorite .

I was born in a lovely city located in Hunan province in China. Last month I finished college and started looking for a job. I want to make more friends and will do my best to help anyone. In addition, I like learning English because it is my favorite language to learn and it is required for my job.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I was born in a beautiful citiy,which located in Hunan province in of China.  My collegue life had ended last month I just finished my college life ,and is now seek looking for a job. now, I want to make more friends and be will to do my best to help anybody .otherwise I like to learn English not only due to my because of work needed but it also is my favorite activity.