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白安1990s 白安1990s 这个星期因为我发现白安有新的专辑所以我很开心。随着我星期六在互联网看到新的白安视频， 所以马上我在iTunes买了。这位台湾歌手以前的音乐作品是2012年，还2014年做的。这次我们需要等四年。 在我看上这些新的首歌很好听。万千值得等四年。她的声音又美丽又温柔。我觉得有的时候好像我 Dolores O’Riordan。不是复杂的音乐式。 流行音乐， 很容易喜欢的。帮着你放松， 在难过的时间陪你。还好像她成熟一点儿。 也许有民乐影响稍微。 我觉得民乐跟她的唱歌式很合适的。也许将来她继续这样的变化。 文的目的是为了练习使用关于-专辑、互联网、歌手、万千、温柔、成熟 Is this the right way to use 稍微? (translation to help understand what I am trying to say) This week I’m pleased because I discovered Ann Bai has a new album out. On Saturday on internet I I saw a new video, So I bought it on itunes. This Taiwan singer before published works in 2012 and 2014. This time we had to wait 4 years. I think the new songs are good. It was really worth waiting 4 years. Her voice is both beautiful and warm. I think sometimes she sounds like Dolores O’Riordan. It isn’t complicated music. Pop music, easy to like. To help you to relax, and be with you through problems. I think she has matured a bit. Maybe there is a slight influence of folk music. I think folk music suits her singing style. Maybe in the future she will continue with this change.

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白安1990s

白安1990s
这个星期因为我发现白安有发了新的专辑，所以我很开心。随着我星期六，我在互联网上看到白安的新视频， 所以我马上在iTunes买了。这位台湾歌手在2012年和2014年都发表过作品。这次我们又等了四年。 我觉得这些新的首歌很好听。万千值得等四年。她的声音又美丽又温柔温暖。我觉得她有的时候听起来好像我 Dolores O’Riordan。她的她的不是复杂的音乐式并不复杂。 （大都是）流行音乐， 很容易喜欢的。（它们）帮着你放松， 在难过的时间陪你度过艰难时刻。还好像我觉得她成熟了一点儿。 也许有点受民乐影响稍微。 我觉得她很适合民乐的风格。跟她的唱歌式很合适的。也许将来她还会继续这样的变化。

The use of 稍微 here is not correct. 稍微 is like an adverb in Chinese, so it basically means "a little bit". For example, 我比他稍微高一点儿 means " I am a little bit taller than him." 


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白安1990s

白安1990s
这个星期因为我发现白安◤发了◢新的专辑所以我很开心。●我星期六在◤网上◢看到新的白安视频， 所以◤我马上◢在iTunes买了。这位台湾歌手以前的音乐作品是◤在◢2012年◤和◢2014年做的。这次我们需要等四年。 在我看◤来◢这些新的●歌很好听。◤非常◢值得等四年。她的声音又美丽又温柔。我觉得有的时候好像我 Dolores O’Riordan。不是复杂的音乐◤形式◢。 流行音乐， 很容易◤让人◢喜欢的。帮●你放松， 在难过的时间陪你。●她◤好像◢成熟◤了◢一点儿。 也许◤稍微◢有民乐影响。 我觉得民乐跟她的唱歌式很合适的。也许将来她继续这样的变化。
文的目的是为了练习使用关于-专辑、互联网、歌手、万千、温柔、成熟
Is this the right way to use 稍微?

稍微is like adv, eg.稍微咸了点（a little bit salty）稍微过来一点（come closer）

互联网and 万千 sounds formal. They are big words, eg.互联网迅速发展，互联网时代/皇后集万千宠爱于一身（The queen has been given a lot of love ）

(translation to help understand what I am trying to say)
This week I’m pleased because I discovered Ann Bai has a new album out. On Saturday on internet I I saw a new video, So I bought it on itunes. This Taiwan singer before published works in 2012 and 2014. This time we had to wait 4 years. I think the new songs are good. It was really worth waiting 4 years. Her voice is both beautiful and warm. I think sometimes she sounds like Dolores O’Riordan. It isn’t complicated music. Pop music, easy to like. To help you to relax, and be with you through problems. I think she has matured a bit. Maybe there is a slight influence of folk music. I think folk music suits her singing style. Maybe in the future she will continue with this change.

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😂😂，I wanna answer this question for you, but I haven't listened to any her songs, so I am going to do that. Then I will back.😊😊

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