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Chinese Translation Practice 1. The Fairy Maiden’s mom caught the Fairy Maiden and brought her back by stealth while the Herd-boy was not at home. At the moment when the Herd-boy seemed about to catch up with the Fairy Maiden, her mom pulled out her hair clasp and drew a line behind her. A very wide river appeared. 织女的妈妈王女娘娘 趁着牛郎不在家,王女娘娘把织女偷偷得抓回去了。眼看牛郎几乎就要追上了她的时候,她的妈妈拔下头上的簪子往身后一划。 一条很宽的河出现了。 2. I don't know what kind of story the western Valentine’s Day originates from, but i do know Chinese Valentine’s Day originates from a beautiful and moving legend. 我不知道西方情人节是来源于哪一种故事。但是我知道中国的情人节来源于一个美丽动人的传说. 3.The Herd-boy used to be very poor. He couldn’t afford to buy clothes, he couldn’t afford to buy meat and couldn’t even afford to get married. After the Fairy Maiden came to his home, they ate meat and wore new clothes almost everyday. 以前,牛郎很穷。他买不起新衣服,买不起肉,还连媳妇都娶不起。织女来到他的家以后,他们几乎每天都吃肉,穿新衣服。

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Chinese Translation Practice

1. The Fairy Maiden’s mom caught the Fairy Maiden and brought her back by stealth while the Herd-boy was not at home. At the moment when the Herd-boy seemed about to catch up with the Fairy Maiden, her mom pulled out her hair clasp and drew a line behind her. A very wide river appeared.
织女的妈妈王母娘娘 趁着牛郎不在家,王女娘娘把织女偷偷的Or地抓回去了。眼看牛郎几乎就要追上了她的时候,她的妈妈拔下头上的簪子往身后一划。 一条很宽的河出现了。

2. I don't know what kind of story the western Valentine’s Day originates from, but i do know Chinese Valentine’s Day originates from a beautiful and moving legend.
我不知道西方情人节是来源于哪一种故事,但是我知道中国的情人节来源于一个美丽动人的传说.

3.The Herd-boy used to be very poor. He couldn’t afford to buy clothes, he couldn’t afford to buy meat and couldn’t even afford to get married. After the Fairy Maiden came to his home, they ate meat and wore new clothes almost everyday.
以前,牛郎很穷。他买不起新衣服,买不起肉,还连媳妇都娶不到(better)。织女来到他的家以后,他们几乎每天都吃肉,穿新衣服。
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Chinese Translation Practice

1. The Fairy Maiden’s mom caught the Fairy Maiden and brought her back by stealth while the Herd-boy was not at home. At the moment when the Herd-boy seemed about to catch up with the Fairy Maiden, her mom pulled out her hair clasp and drew a line behind her. A very wide river appeared.
织女的妈妈王母娘娘  趁着牛郎不在家把织女偷偷的抓回去了。眼看牛郎几乎就要追上了她的时候,她的妈妈拔下头上的簪子往身后一划。 一条很宽的河出现了。

2. I don't know what kind of story the western Valentine’s Day originates from, but i do know Chinese Valentine’s Day originates from a beautiful and moving legend.
我不知道西方情人节是来源于哪一种故事。但是我知道中国的情人节来源于一个美丽动人的传说.

3.The Herd-boy used to be very poor. He couldn’t afford to buy clothes, he couldn’t afford to buy meat and couldn’t even afford to get married. After the Fairy Maiden came to his home, they ate meat and wore new clothes almost everyday.
以前,牛郎很穷。他买不起新衣服,买不起肉,甚至连媳妇都娶不起。织女来到他的家以后,他们几乎每天都吃肉,穿新衣服。
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As a laissez faire translation, it is doable but as a formal translation, there's much to bone pick with.
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第1句:得 -> 地。其他的都对。

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