Use R
The noise stung my ear
People everywhere
Dad asked why not happier
I am not a trouble maker
But I think I am a litter
I am inferior
Is something the matter
You does not really want to hear
I am fine and no reason to suffer
Be a liar
Its easier
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Nice poem Ari! I'm going to make some minor edits but remember it is ok to bend the rules with poetry.
Use R
People everywhere
Dad asked why I'm not happier
I am not a trouble maker
But I think I am a litter
I am inferior
Is something the matter?
You do not really want to hear
I am fine and no reason to suffer
Be a liar
It's easier
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Litter: I don't know what word you mean to use here
Do: You do not want to know, you do not like fish, you do a lot of work (just some examples)
______: I think there is a verb missing. I'm going to suggest some examples
I am fine and have no reason to suffer, I am fine and see no reason to suffer, I am fine and create no reason to suffer.
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The noise stung in my ears
If it is a real noise it would sting in both ears. Otherwise it sounds like you only have one ear! If you reall want to say one ear you could say 'one of my ears' or maybe 'my left ear'. Better with 'in' as to directly sting your ear seems more like an insect.
As with a lot of uncountables you can quantify 'litter' with 'a piece of'
But I think I am a piece of litter
a piece of rubbish might be easier to understand as litter is more specific.
Works well.
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