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I recommend reading and listening to more Korean media before writing journal entries. Your Korean is not too bad but sentence structures are quite choppy and English-like, well, I cannot blame you to harshly on that as you seem to be a native English speaker. Be aware that Korean (and other Asian languages) and English (and other European languages) are too vastly different to the point that verbatim translation does not work most of the time unless you are translating really short sentences. Sorry if I came across as rude, and enjoy learning Korean.

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바쁘다 busy

Actually, there is no 1 to 1 match between 'be stressed' in English and that in Korean.. So, u'd better try to translate that like this: they are in harsh of too much stress. -> 그들은 스트레스가 심합니다.

저는 다행이합니다입니다. 왜냐하면 날마다 수업하고 수업 준비만 하면 되기 때문입니다. 

-> Actually we don't say it like that because the first sentence is too short and we usually combine them into one sentences to say it quickly. So, It's more natural to say like that:

 1) 저는 다행인 것이, 왜냐하면 ... 때문입니다.(by using independent clause)

 2) 저는 (수업하고 수업 준비만 하면 되기 때문에) 다행입니다.(by using subordinate clause)

오늘, 제가 셋개 수업 세 개의 수업 OR 수업 세 개 밖에 안 있없었습니다.

-> [something] 밖에 없다. there is just only [something].

부장님이 새V교과서를 선택하고 네 개 수업을 가르칩니다.

-> 이 (stop consonant : O) // 가 (stop consonant : X)

-> 은 (stop consonant : O) // 는 (stop consonant : X)

영어로 가르치고V나서 한국어를 공부합니다.

-> 그 뒤에, -하고 나서 then 

-> '-를' can be omitted in oral, but it's not recommended in written.

4시 30분이 되면, 나는 갑니다.

-> 4시 30분 four thirty  //   4시 반 four and an half hour(It's not correct in English, but It's the most popular expression to express an half hour in Korea)

cf) XX시 : time  //  XX시간 : the period

저회 (그러나) 저의 동료들은 8시쯤까지 직장에 있어야 합니다.

-> -해야만 한다 have to

about (adverb) 대충, ~쯤, 대략 approximately

저희 is a plural form. now that you are the only one, u cannot use '저희, but '저의, 제(abbreviated)'

저보다 동료들이 힘들지만, 도음 즙지만 자주 할 수 없습니다. 저는 자주 할 수 없어도 그들을 도우려고 합니다.

-> A는 B보다 [original form]이다.   A is [comparative form] than B

how to make comparative : just add "-보다" in front of the adjective/determiner..

 * 보다 = -er than

how to make superlative : just add "가장" in front of the adjective/determiner.

행복은 돈보다 좋다. // Happiness는 money보다 good is. => Happiness is better than money.

행복이 가장 좋다 Happiness is the best thing.

그럼에도, 그래도 even though

저는 도넛이나 과자를 가져옵니다 - 동료들은 좋아합니다 저는 동료들이 좋아할 것이라고 생각합니다.

저는/나는 [you thought]라고 생각합니다. I think [your thought].

Sure! My school teachers are busy and stressed. I'm fortunate because I only teach or prepare classes everyday. Today, I only had three classes. My director is selecting the new text books and had four classes. I teach English then I study Korean. After 4:30, I leave, my colleagues have to stay until around 8. It's much more difficult for my coworkers than for me, but I try and help them even though I often can't. I bring donuts or snacks - I think they like it.