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婚礼2 Weddings 2 婚礼2 Weddings 2 虽然原来按照习俗新娘的家庭必须付款婚礼,可是现在两个家庭都一起付款。 客人买一个礼物。常常新娘跟新郎写一个网上单的他们需要的东西/比如冰箱,电视,等等。客人选择一个合适的礼物,符合*他们跟家庭关系。 经济危机以前很多人婚礼的时候花很多钱,比如500多各人,很大的乐队。但是现在简单的婚礼也流行。 Weddings 2 In the past the tradition was for the bride’s parents to pay for the wedding but nowadays both families pay. The guests buy a wedding present. Often the bride and groom publish a wedding list online of the things they need – a fridge, TV, etc. Guests can choose a suitable gift according to their relationship with the family. Before the financial crisis a lot of people had very expensive weddings – over 500 guests, a lot of musicians, etc. But now a more simple wedding is also popular. * I'm not sure if 符合 works here. Maybe it should be 按照?

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婚礼2 Weddings 2

婚礼2 Weddings 2
虽然按照原来的习俗,婚礼的费用由新娘的家庭来承担,但是现在由两个家庭一起来承担。
客人通常会根据新娘跟新郎在网上上传的他们需要的东西的清单(比如冰箱,电视,等等)和他们跟这个家庭的关系来选择一个合适的礼物。* I made them into one sentence.
经济危机以前很多人在办婚礼的时候花很多钱,比如邀请500多位客人,请乐队来演出。但是现在简单的婚礼也很流行。
Weddings 2
In the past the tradition was for the bride’s parents to pay for the wedding but nowadays both families pay.
The guests buy a wedding present. Often the bride and groom publish a wedding list online of the things they need – a fridge, TV, etc. Guests can choose a suitable gift according to their relationship with the family.
Before the financial crisis a lot of people had very expensive weddings – over 500 guests, a lot of musicians, etc. But now a more simple wedding is also popular.

* I'm not sure if 符合 works here. Maybe it should be 按照? 

符合is used when the object is determinate, like a rule, a standard. 符合is like "be consistent with sth".

eg. 符合事实,符合质量标准

关系 here can be close or poor, so it is not a standard. 符合doesn't work here.

根据+ your reasons that you use to make a judgment, decision, etc.

eg. 根据树叶的稀疏判断方向。


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婚礼2 Weddings 2

婚礼2 Weddings 2
虽然原来按照习俗新娘的家庭必须支付婚礼的开销付款婚礼,可是现在两个家庭都一起支付付款。
客人买一个礼物。常常新娘跟新郎写一个在网上公布一个它们的清单,包含他们需要的东西/比如冰箱,电视,等等。客人选择一个合适的礼物,符合*他们跟家庭关系。
经济危机以前很多人婚礼的时候花很多钱,比如500多客各人,很大的乐队。但是现在简单的婚礼也流行。
Weddings 2
In the past the tradition was for the bride’s parents to pay for the wedding but nowadays both families pay.
The guests buy a wedding present. Often the bride and groom publish a wedding list online of the things they need – a fridge, TV, etc. Guests can choose a suitable gift according to their relationship with the family.
Before the financial crisis a lot of people had very expensive weddings – over 500 guests, a lot of musicians, etc. But now a more simple wedding is also popular.

* I'm not sure if 符合 works here. Maybe it should be 按照?  In this case, 符合 doesn't work here. 按照 is Ok. The right pattern is 按照... ,..........(main clause).   subject + 符合 +object. 按照 is similar to preposition in English, but 符合 is a verb. You could say 虽然原来新娘的家庭 付款婚礼符合习俗。 





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婚礼2 Weddings 2

婚礼2 Weddings 2
尽管按照传统的习俗,新娘的家庭必须独自承担婚礼的费用,然而现在,双方家庭要共同负担。
客人购买礼物,常常是新娘跟新郎在网上发布一份物品清单,上面列出了他们需要的东西,比如冰箱、电视、等等。客人根据他们与新郎新娘家庭的关系选择一份合适的礼物。
经融危机以前很多人的婚礼要花很多钱,比如要请500多位嘉宾,还要请一个很大的乐队。但是现在也流行简单的婚礼。
Weddings 2
In the past the tradition was for the bride’s parents to pay for the wedding but nowadays both families pay.
The guests buy a wedding present. Often the bride and groom publish a wedding list online of the things they need – a fridge, TV, etc. Guests can choose a suitable gift according to their relationship with the family.
Before the financial crisis a lot of people had very expensive weddings – over 500 guests, a lot of musicians, etc. But now a more simple wedding is also popular.

* I'm not sure if 符合 works here. Maybe it should be 按照?
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Perhaps , "publish "is more appropriate.
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hi, The meaning of the "发布” is "post" ,I think.

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