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A horrible night Friday night , beautiful night. Everybody go for a wine. But only me sit under the light, Viewing, memorize for the test guide. Hope the teacher will be nice, Check the paper with all "right"

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A horrible night

Friday night, a beautiful night.
Everybody go went for a wine.
But only me siting under the a light,
Viewing, memorize memorizing for the test guide.
Hope the teacher will be nice,
Check the paper with an "alright!" 1

I give you an "A++" for your efforts for wading into the highly specialized area of English. I give you an "A++" for the sentiments you try to express and finally I commend you in your endeavour to learn English seriously.

1.   Alright can also be used a slang meaning great, okay etc.  For example: 

Tony: "We were able to get premium seats for the concert for a cheap price."

Bill: "Alright!"


 

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A horrible night

Friday night, a beautiful night.
Everybody go has gone for a wine.  (1)
But only me I sit under the light,
Reviewing, to memorize for the test guide. (2)
Hope the teacher will be nice,
And mark Check the paper with all "right."

It is a nice poem.

Notes:

1. Or "went" as the others suggested. Or "is out" might be good too.
2. Perhaps this is closer to what you meant.
3. I've interpreted this differently from the others above. 

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A horrible night

Friday night was a  beautiful night.
Everybody went for a wine.
But only I sit under the light,
Reviewing and memorizing for the test guide.
I hope the teacher will be nice,
Check the paper alright.

I hope this helps, I'm no english teacher. But for an average americain I think this is alright :)

 

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