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Why I'd like to work for "Azul"? Hi guys, I'm currently practicing for writing tests. I'd be happy if someone could correct this essay. Thank you! I already knew about Azul (company) reputation. It’s one of the best airlines in the world. It's innovative and has exceptional standard of costumer services. I have been making a research about how Azul is as a employer and this is surely inspiring me. I watched many videos of employers who are grateful to work and grow up with the company. They also said about the excellent trainings and how Azul take care them. This is why I believe, admire and I want to my professional life. I would love to be part of Azul.

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Why I'd like to work for "Azul"?

Hi guys, I'm currently practicing for writing tests. I'd be happy if someone could correct this essay. Thank you!

I already know about Azul's (company) reputation. It’s one of the best airlines in the world and it's innovative and has exceptional standard of costumer services. I have been researching about how Azul is as an employer and it has surely inspired me. I watched many videos of employers who are grateful to work for and grow with the company. They also spoke about the excellent training and how Azul takes care of them. This is why I believe, admire and I want to further my professional life. I would love to be part of Azul.


The second to last sentence (This is why...) could be worded differently. Maybe something like this:

What I have seen has shown me that Azul is a place where I can further my profession and grow as an individual. 

Boa sorte!

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Why I'd like to work for "Azul".

Hi guys. I'm currently practicing for writing tests. I'd be happy if someone could correct this essay. Thank you!

I already knew about Azul's  (company) reputation. It’s one of the best airlines in the world. It's innovative and has exceptional standards of custumer service. I have been researching what Azul is like as an employer, and this is surely inspiring me. I watched many videos of employees who are grateful to work and develop with the company. They also talked about the excellent training, and how Azul takes care them. This is why I believe in, admire and  want my professional life to be with Azul. I would love to be part of Azul.
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Why I'd like to work for "Azul"?

Hi guys, I'm currently practicing for writing tests. I'd be happy if someone could correct this essay. Thank you!

I already knew about Azuls' (company) reputation. It’s one of the best airlines in the world. It's innovative and has an exceptional standard of costumer customer services. I have been making a doing research about on how Azul is as an employer and this is surely inspiring me. I watched many videos of employers employees who are were grateful to work and grow up with the company. They also said spoke about the excellent trainings and how Azul take took care them. This is why how I believe, admire aspire and want to my professional life to be. I would love to be part of Azul.


Hope you find this helpful :) 

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Boa sorte, Vanessa! Acredito que você ainda esteja tentando escrever em Inglês procurando uma equivalência entre as palavras em Português. Na maioria das vezes isso não funciona. :-( Na primeira frase acho que ficaria melhor - I've known about Azul reputation - porque acredito que o present perfect passa exatamente o sentido do que você quis dizer. Às vezes quando a gente escreve alguma coisa, o sentido não fica completo ou claro e por causa disso a frase principal necessita de um complemento ou uma segunda frase pra completar o sentido do que se quer passar. Por exemplo se você quer dizer que já conhecia a boa reputação da empresa poderia mencionar um época de um passado distante pra enfatizar - Since I was a high school student I've known about Azul reputation. Pelo que entendi você quis dizer que fez algumas pesquisas sobre a empresa, então acredito que fique melhor alterar mais alguma coisa na tua frase - Since I was a high school student I've heard about Azul reputation. Acho melhor se guiar pelos padrões e os sentidos/intenções que eles passam. Pelo menos assim eu cometo menos erros. Depois nos fale se ocorreu tudo certo na tua entrevista. Até mais!
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My name is Carlos Henrique Ferreira. I'm from Brazil and English student. I'd like to practice my English and help anyone to practice Portuguese too. If You want, add me on WhatsApp: +55 11 94332 1115. See You!!!

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