would you please help me to modify the small composition ?
1.Is it necessary to sleep enough?
Enough sleep is vital for children's growth and Envelopment ,According to the research,the body will restore energy when sleep well. It's important to improve work and study efficiency. Because enough sleep is good for alertness and focus.
2. Do old people sleep a lot
Most of people don't sleep a lot, I sent, this is because their physiologycal functions started to decorate .The evening sleep decreases and sleep quality declines.
3. Is taking a nap important?
It's important to take a nap especially in the afternoon.Our body can eliminate fatigue and restore energy quickly. Simultaneously,It's good for study and work efficiency.
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Would you please help me to modify the this small composition?
1. Is it necessary to sleep enough?Enough sleep is vital for children's growth and development. (<--"Envelope" 的意思是“包围”。) According to the research, the body will restore energy when sleep it is well-rested. (<--这听上去更自然。) It's important to for improving work and study efficiency because enough sleep is good for alertness and focus.
2. Do old elderly (<--"Old" 这个词没有礼貌。) people sleep a lot?
Most of elderly people don't sleep a lot. I sent, sense (<--"Sent" 的意思是“寄了”。) this is because their physiological functions started to decorate deteriorate. (<--"Decorate" 的意思是“装饰”。) The Evening sleep decreases and sleep quality declines.
3. Is taking a naps important?
It's important to take a naps, especially in the afternoon. Our bodies can eliminate fatigue and restore energy quickly. Simultaneously Additionally, it's good for study and work efficiency.
写得不错,Afra。有问题请别怕问 =)
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