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Writing #1 A special occasion I want to talk about Inti Raymi. It happens in Cuzco, Peru on 24th of June On this day, they always celebrate a huge tradicional party in the main square. A lot of traditional musicans are in that place, in all day you can hear songs with drums and quenas ( air instrument , similar to a flute). They have a special custom, the Inca, the leader in the celebration, wear a dress with ornaments, a hat with feathers and ojotas ( inca's shoes) I like it because is a celebration to give thanks to the earth for the food in the all year.

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Writing #1

A special occasion

I want to talk about Inti Raymi.
It happens in Cuzco, Peru on the 24th of June.
On this day, they always celebrate a huge tradicional party in the main square. A lot of traditional musicans are in that place, in and all day you can hear songs with drums and quenas ( air instrument , similar to a flute).
They have a special custom where the Inca, the leader in the celebration, wears a dress with ornaments, a hat with feathers and ojotas ( inca's shoes).

I like it because it is a celebration to give thanks to the earth for the food in the all year.

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