中国的奥秘

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我对中文真爱不释手，这就不是个奥秘因为每天很努力地练习这种特别有意思的语言。

--> 对我来说，学中文就像把玩心爱的物件，让人爱不释手。(can't understand the second part)

我学习中文时，感很安宁，还有每天我把中文巴不得多学习。

--> 学中文让我感到安宁，巴不得每天都要多学一点。(omit subjects when the meaning is clear. the use of 把 is not correct.)

有时候我看不懂个汉字，但是常常有暗示帮我想到意思。比如: 要是我知道"水"的意思，看到"冰"时，就即使不认识意思，可以猜到意思。

--> 虽然有的字不懂，但能通过其他字得到暗示。比如，只要知道『水』，即使不认识，也能猜出『冰』是什么意思。

我对中文的兴趣就是因为我觉得中国有深深的奥秘。我就特别想关于这些事学习，侦破这个奥秘。

--> 之所以对中文感兴趣，就是因为觉得中国暗藏深深奥秘。特别想学习关于这个国家的事，这样才能侦破这个奥秘。 

Man and Computer

In modern times, science and technology are developing very quickly and influencing the whole world.

Science and technology is developing rapidly in modern times, changing and transforming the whole world in a radical way.

We got much convenience ,but there are some troubles and questions such as human beings will become lazier.

It has, on the one hand, made our lives much easier, providing us with all kinds of conveniences, but on the other, also caused us trouble.

Many work that had to be done by ourselves is now been carried out by computers. As we become more and more relied on technology, our capacity to think and act independently is undermined.

In the times of information globalization,we send messages not through letters any longer but mobiephones and computer. It denoted that the use of handwriting become less and less,even we could read a word but can't write it often.

Letters are supplanted by emails. Conversations are replaced by text messages. Writing with a pen becomes a form of art, and even books are been read on a screen.

Some hold that the real danger is not that the computer will begin to think like man,but that man will begin to think like computer.

As said by Sydney J. Harris, "The real danger is not that computers will begin to think like men, but that men will begin to think like computers.

So it is nessessary to worry about man's skills of think. Although the computer are able to help us finishing plenty of works,we still need to take good advantages of our own brains.

Worry about the decline of men's mental abilities is not unfounded. Despite all the benefits technology can give us, it is still necessary for us to sharpen our thinking skills and make full use of our own brains.