Voz en una estrella distante, ¶2

El Español no fue un factor enorme en mi vida creciendo. Everytime you star your sentence with a noun, you should always put an article before it. Unless, you are stating pronouns or names.

Aunque crecí en un barrio con gente del caribe y Central América Centroamérica (i.e. p. ej. El Salvador), el idioma primer principal fue inglés. The right way of saying Central America is "Centroamérica" or "América Central." "p. ej." means "Por ejemplo." There are Several ways to say first language in Spanish "Idioma principal," "Primera lengua," "Lengua materna" but you should never say "idioma primer" 

Gran parte de la del española español que oí de niño era de mi mamá, quien la lo aprendió un poco en la universidad (ella lo ha olvidado ahora (aunque recuerdo su frase favorita fue “cera cerra la boca”)). The word "española" means a woman who is from Spain. When talking about the language it is always the masculine word. You should use "lo" because the word "español" is masculine. Although if you meant to say "la aprendio" refering to "la lengua hispana" then the sentence is correct. However, it would not be correct if you wrote it thinking that "la mamá" was who learn it. Almost every english sentence that has the expression "by now" should not include an "ahora" when it is written in Spanish, that is because of the tense in which the sentence has been written indirectly includes it. "Cera" means wax, "Cerra" means close. By the way, the usage of one or two Rs tell you the pronunciation. If it is two Rs then it sounds as the famous R sound that americans cannot pronounce, but if it is only one R then it is the exact same sound as the second syllable in "Daddy" or "Water"

Yo también fui imitado imitando el las universal frases universales idiosincrásico ideosincrásicas que la mayoría de anglohablantes en los Estados Unidos saben (“Qué pasa” “hola” tal vez “qué tal” y algunos números). When writing complex sentences try to pay attention to which word is the main object, after that try to conjugate all articles and adjectives according to it. Remember! most of the time adjectives go after the nouns and objects. If you want to remember that rule think that it makes no sense to start describing an object if you do not know what that object is.

Los EEUU, a diferencia de la mayoría de los países, no tiene un idioma oficial, pero inglés es un su idioma premier principal de administración, y comercio e instrucción. The sentence you wrote with the word "un" is correct, however due to context I can tell that is not the right word to use because it completely changes its meaning. The word "premier" does not exist in Spanish. Lastly, I took the "y" because you had a "e" which means the same thing, therefore you would be creating redundancy writing both "y" and "e." Another thing to remember, the comas in Spanish can mean either "and" or "or" and that is why we never use the oxford comma, because it also creates repetition.

Voz en una estrella distante, ¶2

Voz en una estrella distante, ¶2