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My work Experience part 2 VICE-PRESIDENT – Business Students Union (Volunteer) When we started our work there the Students Union was closed, and it had a lot of debts. So our first movement was re-engage the univervity's community and build new relations with the academic stakeholders: teachers, principal e etc. It was hard at the very begging, because everything was totally messed up. So we had to stand up, define real goals and work together to achieve it. I played a lead role in this process, since I already had experience in NGO's. During this transition I could put together several projects and define the internal policies to the organization, my main responsabilities were: + Colead the institution and the directors and ensure the Association is cohesive and effective – responsible for allocation of funds. + Promote the Purpose, Vision, Aims and Objectives of the Students’ Union; + Represent the views of the students at key meetings with the Rector and Professors and external stakeholders; + Actively contribute to the planning, development and implementation of the strategic and operational plans of the Association;

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My work Experience part 2

VICE-PRESIDENT – Business Students Union (Volunteer)

(1)When we started our work there the Students Union was closed, and it had a lot of debts. Our first movement step was to re-engage the univervity's university's community and build new relations with the academic stakeholders: teachers, principal e etc.

It was hard at the very begging beginning, because everything was totally messed up (disorganized works better because this a more formal text). We had to stand up (better wording here. What exactly do you mean?), define real  (our) goals and work together to achieve it. I played a lead role in this process, since I already had experience in NGO's. During this transition, I could (not wrong, but I'd eliminate the could) put together several projects and define the internal policies to of the organization. My main responsabilities responsibilities were:

+ Co-lead the institution (2) and ,the directors and ensure the Association is was working in a  cohesive and effective way (3)– responsible for allocation of funds.
+ Promote the Purpose, Vision, Aims and Objectives of the Students’ Union;
+ Represent the views of the students at key meetings with the Rector and , pProfessors and external stakeholders;
+ Actively contribute to the planning, development and implementation of the strategic and operational plans of the Association;


1)When we have to work there...works when you've already introduced the subject matter. Putting it in the first sentence makes people wonder what is "there"?

2) Institution it's something you'd use for a university, or another prominent place. I wouldn't use it unless it was some sort of prominent student union.

3) It was good up to effective way. "Responsible for allocation of funds" works better as a separate bullet point.





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