My Mother in Law's Peonies
A little about me, my mother in law used to grow pink peonies in her garden and loved them when she was alive.
She used to say " you should come here when the peonies are in full bloom."
Our family lived in Kagoshima those days, so we couldn't come to kumamoto so frequently.
We couldn't live her house after she died, but I replanted her peonies in my mother's garden, because I had no place to grow the peonies, and my mother lives nearby town.
My mother takes care of the peonies, so I can see them every flower season. I also offer the flowers my mother in law's Buddhist altar in my home.
I hope she likes to see them, she lives in the next world though.
* This writing is a part of a letter to my penpal. Would you mind correct my writing? Does this make sense? Thank you in advance.
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My Mother in Law's Peonies
A little about me, my mother in law used to grow pink peonies in her garden and loved them when she was alive.She used to say " you should come here when the peonies are in full bloom."
Our family lived in Kagoshima those days, so we couldn't come to Kumamoto so frequently.
We couldn't live in her house after she died, but I replanted her peonies in my mother's garden, because I had no place to grow the peonies, and my mother lives in a nearby town.
My mother takes care of the peonies, so I can see them bloom every flower season. I also offer the flowers in my mother in law's Buddhist altar in my at home.
I hope she likes to see them, she lives in the next world though.
* This writing is a part of a letter to my pen pal. Would you mind correct my writing? Does this make sense? Thank you in advance.
Yes, it makes sense, and it's a beautiful thought.
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My Mother in Law's Peonies
A little about me, my mother in law used to grow pink peonies in her garden and loved them when she was alive.She used to say " you should come here when the peonies are in full bloom."
Our family lived in Kagoshima in those days, so we couldn't come to kumamoto that frequently.
We couldn't live her house after she died, but I replanted her peonies in my mother's garden, because I had no place to grow the peonies, and my mother lives in a nearby town.
My mother takes care of the peonies, so I can see them every spring. I also offer the flowers at my mother in law's Buddhist altar in my home.
I hope she likes to see them, she lives in the next world though.
* This writing is a part of a letter to my penpal. Would you mind correct my writing? Does this make sense? Thank you in advance.
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My Mother in Law's Peonies
A little about me, my mother in law used to grow pink peonies in her garden and loved them when she was alive.She used to say " you should come here when the peonies are in full bloom."
Our family lived in Kagoshima those days, so we couldn't come to kumamoto very often.
We couldn't live in her house after she died, but I replanted her peonies in my mother's garden, because I had no place to grow the peonies, and my mother lives in a nearby town.
My mother takes care of the peonies, so I can see them every flower season. I also offer the flowers in my mother in law's Buddhist altar in my home.
I hope she likes to see them, although she lives in the next world.
* This writing is a part of a letter to my penpal. Would you mind correct my writing? Does this make sense? Thank you in advance.
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