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Fe hoffwn i dipyn bach o helpu (eto) Dyma'r brawddegau eraill. Rwy'n bwriadu i astudio'r eirfa a'r strwythur. Rwy'n wedi trïo i eu cywiro gyda'r cynghorion taw rwy'n wedi gael. Mae rhyw o'r brawddegau wedi bod cymeryd dod "Bedd Gelert" a "Asterix a Obelix", ond fe newidies i nhw tipyn bach (Is it the correct way to say "I changed them"?), felly efallai bydd yna balciau (neu "camgymeriad"?). 1. Mae'n well gyda fi weld pawb yma, maes o law os yw'n bosib. (I prefer to see everyone here, soon if possible.) Is there any difference between "maes o law" and "buan"? 2. Fe fydd dy waith di bod mwy diddorol o ddydd i ddydd. (Your work will get more interesting day by day) 3. Mae gen i syniad sut i ymladd yn ôl yn erbyn yr arf cyfrin ysgar. (I have an idea on how to fight back against the enemy's secret weapon.) 4. Fe fydda i'n cyfieithu'r testun yn gyflym. (I will translate this text rapidly) 5. Yn affodus, fyddwn ni ddim yn gallu cael dosbarth heddiw. (Sadly, we wont be able to have a class today) 6. Yn ôl yn y cartref, ymhlith y teulu, roedd Gelert yn ffrefyn gan bawb am ei addfwynder a'i natur dda. (Back at home, amongst his family, Gelert was everyone's favorite because of his gentleness and his good nature. 7, Fe fyddwn ni'n aros am bedwar mis, o leia, yn y wlad arall cyn y byddwn ni'n teithio eto. (We will wait for four months, at least, in another country before we travel again.) 8.Fe fydd hyn yn affethio yn fawr arnon ni fel myfyrwyr canadaidd. (This will affect us a lot as Canadian students.) Rwy'n mynd i trïo i chwarae'r gitâr fel proffesiynol. (I'm going to try to play the guitar like a professional) Diolch ymlaen llaw!

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Fe hoffwn i dipyn bach o helpu (eto)

Dyma'r brawddegau eraill. Rwy'n bwriadu i astudio'r eirfa a'r strwythur. Rwy'n wedi trïo i eu cywiro gyda'r cynghorion taw [taw is only used if the clause it introduces begins with something other than the verb] rwy'n wedi'u cael. Mae rhyw rhai o'r brawddegau wedi bod cael eu cymeryd dod o "Bedd Gelert" ac "Asterix ac Obelix", ond fe newidies i nhw tipyn bach, felly efallai bydd yna balciau (neu "camgymeriadau"?).

1. Mae'n well gyda fi weld pawb yma, maes o law yn fuan os yw'n bosib.
(I prefer to see everyone here, soon if possible.)
Is there any difference between "maes o law" and "buan"? Buan sounds more urgent, maes o law is more like "presently, in due course"

2. Fe fydd dy waith di'n bod fwy ddiddorol o ddydd i ddydd.
(Your work will get more interesting day by day)

3. Mae gen i syniad am sut i ymladd yn ôl yn erbyn yr arf cyfrin ysgar y gelyn [ysgar is an archaic word].
(I have an idea on how to fight back against the enemy's secret weapon.)

4. Fe fydda i'n cyfieithu'r testun 'ma yn gyflym.
(I will translate this text rapidly)
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5. Yn anffodus, fyddwn ni ddim yn gallu cael dosbarth heddiw.
(Sadly, we wont be able to have a class today)

6. Yn ôl yn y gartref, ymhlith y teulu, roedd Gelert yn ffrefryn gan bawb am ei addfwynder a'i natur dda.
(Back at home, amongst his family, Gelert was everyone's favorite because of his gentleness and his good nature.

7, Fe fyddwn ni'n aros am bedwar mis, o leia, yn y mewn gwlad arall [mewn is used for "in" with indefinite nouns, to use yn the noun must be definite: yn y wlad arall = "in the other country"] cyn y byddwn ni'n [this is unnecessary as the subject is the same as that of the main clause (and if the subject were different, you would use a contruction with i, e.g. cyn iddo deithio eto = "before he travels again")] teithio eto.
(We will wait for four months, at least, in another country before we travel again.)

8.Fe fydd hyn yn effeithio yn fawr arnon ni fel myfyrwyr Canadaidd.
(This will affect us a lot as Canadian students.)

Rwy'n mynd i drïo i chwarae'r gitâr fel proffesiynol. [there's no preposition after trïo, bwriadu, sut, etc. Don't let yourself be influenced by English usage]
(I'm going to try to play the guitar like a professional)

Diolch ymlaen llaw!

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