I am graduate……
Today I recived my bachelor's degree. From now on, I 'm not a student, but an officer. Maybe it is very hard to word, but I will make great efforts to do it. And I hope everyone of my friends can have a bright future!
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I am graduate……
Brad's comments are good. I'd only make one change...Today I
An officer? That is generally used for people in the military or the police. I think you mean a graduate right?
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I am a graduate……
Today I received my bachelor's degree. From now on, I 'm not a student but an officer. Maybe it will be very hard work, but I will make great efforts to do it. And I hope every one of my friends can have a bright future!0
officer is a military position, i guess you want to describe yourself as an office lady.
office lady is abbreviated to “OL”, which may be more familiar to most of people.
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Best of luck to you!
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good luck! ^_^
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