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这里的头发剪 上星期五，我有了一个头发剪。但是太贵了，因为接近一个城市，所以我要找到另一的理发师。

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上星期五，我有了一个头发剪我剪了头发。但是太贵了，因为接近一个城市因为离市区很近，所以我要再找到另一位的理发师。
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在这里剪的头发价格很贵

上星期五，我剪了一个新发型。但是太贵了，因为接近市中心，所以我要找到另一位的理发师。
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这里理发太贵了

上星期五，我去剪头发/理发了。但因为接近市区，价格太贵，所以我要再找另一位理发师。
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这里的理头发剪

上星期五，我去有了一个剪头发, 剪。但是太贵了. 因为接近一个沒法子, 太靠近城市，所以不过还我要找到另一个的理发师。
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Hi Robin. How do you compose the essay? Do you make them in English first, then translate them into Chinese one by one? If yes, I suggest you forget your first step. You need memory the Chinese action verbs. For example, hair-cut in Chinese is cutting hair 剪 头发. You also need notice the word order in Chinese. A better way is to imitate sentence structure templates and fill in the blanks.

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