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lein's notebook entry: May 29, 2011 Awfully bad taste ! I found rainbow peppr that looks really beatifull in a grocery. It includes 4 kinds of pepper,grean,black,white and pink. A Nice glass grinder is attatched with it and it only cost around 250 yen! That's a good buy I thought,but,noooo~~! Why it tastes mud and fuel??? Pepper normally doesn't taste like this. oueeee. I made mutton curry and pumpkin curry and pork curry yesterday. They were,of course,yummy! I love to cock curry and I wanted to try the pepper with curry but I didn't. Oh,I got short of kumin. Tomorow I'll go and get it.

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lein's notebook entry: May 29, 2011 Awfully bad taste !

I found a packet of rainbow pepper that looks really beautiful in at a grocery.
It includes 4 kinds of pepper: green, black, white and pink. << Pink pepper?? o_O
A nice glass grinder is attached with to it and it only cost around 250 yen!
That's a good buy or so I thought !
Why does it tastes like mud and fuel???
Pepper normally doesn't taste like this. oueeee Waaahh. << English sfx :p

I made mutton curry, pumpkin curry and pork curry yesterday.
They were,of course,yummy!
I love to cook curry and I wanted to try the pepper with curry but I didn't.
Oh, I got ran short of cumin.
Tomorrow I'll go and get some.

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Guide: Red=訂正|Blue=推敲|Yellow=わかり難い|Green=意見

Good entry. It seems like spelling is your only problem, so that's good :)
Many people in America do not know what mutton is, so if you're talking to them, you may want to use the word lamb instead (even though they are not quite the same). 

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